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Stay With Me

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Stay With Me

Did you know, that you hold
My heart, in the palm of your hand
And when I lay me down 
It's to you, I pray my soul keeps
So darlin', would you stay with me

Would you stay, this way
Wrapped up, right here in my arms
For forever and a day
Cause I need you that way
Never knew, I could feel this much
So darlin', would you stay with me

You got walls, that's ok
I'll spend my lifetime chipping away
From now until when, you can let me come in
I'd gladly wait, on the dark side of the moon
So darlin', would you stay with me

If I wrote it all down
Would you come around	 
If I could sing it, without going off key
Tell me darlin, would you stay with me

Would you stay, this way
Wrapped up, right here in my arms
For forever and a day
Cause I need you that way
Never knew, I could feel this much
So darlin', would you stay with me

But if you go
You should know
I'm never more than a call away
There's no place too far
Cause where ever you are, is right where I'm meant to be
So darlin', would you stay with me

Please darlin', would you stay with me








 

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  1. Date: 8/19/2013 3:20:00 PM
    Beautiful poem, Rachel! A very sweet and touching love poem. This flows really nicely, well done! You might enjoy my poem titled, "Forbidden Love". Also, thank you for reading my poem "Soul Mate", and for the nice comments. I really appreciate it!

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 4:40:00 AM
    Excellent, love the sentimentality. Welcome. Rick

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 8:40:00 PM
    excellent, Rachel :-) it's good to know you will always be there.... Hugs* SKAT

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 6:48:00 PM
    Loving sentiments expressed so heartfelt.Enjoyed reading this today.Welcome to poetrysoup.

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 1:43:00 PM
    This is beautiful. Declarations of heart, while daring to ask love if they will declare the same. Fantastic job!

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 12:51:00 PM
    Rachel, only your heart knows, thanks for sharing your poem... -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

    Tate Avatar Rachel Tate
    Date: 7/27/2013 1:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks again for you kind words and warm welcome. I've read some of your work too, and i'm a fan :)