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THE STARS WILL BE WATCHING US

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THE STARS WILL BE WATCHING US



Mint stars reaching out to greet the sky Cool zephyr blowing across your cheeks Much nearer, your silhouette appears Like a fog carried by beams ,you advance With sequins on hair tossed by the breeze As your flowing chemise billows like a sail To throttle on bare toes across our woods I seek your face rising from scented grass A nape blushing like jasmine’s breath I become an orbit twirling summer’s fire That my eyes behold a sigh in the light And the edges between us grow tighter While your fingers moan to whisper this lore;
“The stars will be watching us, and we will show them what it is to be a thin crescent moon. You and I unselfed, will be together...”
And this magic frees me to sing in drawls You murmur,"soak in the pour of rain," While we lay on the meadow of my arms Allowing the lanterns that hang on air To consume a flame kindling our breaths Until you and I become one stem. ----- -------------- *Inspiration from the poem of Sufi poet, Rumi, ( A Moment of Happiness), a stanza highlighted above. Any Poem Contest #4

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  1. Date: 8/17/2013 8:07:00 PM
    Nette a wonderful win... , congrats on the Homage to this poet... SKAT

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 5:54:00 PM
    lovely so lovely Nette good pen congrats Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 11:19:00 AM
    So beautiful, Nette. A very well deserved win. You are hitting a lot of homeruns recently!

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 11:08:00 AM
    Congrad's on your win! Always a sensory delight Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 7:35:00 AM
    Lovely. Your words have an ethereal quality that makes them float through our imaginations.

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 7:18:00 AM
    As always, exceptional. I just love how you express yourself. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 4:16:00 PM
    hi nette, long time no see/comment! love this, very intriguing, and chock full of your unique, beautiful imagery; perfect opening and closing lines, always indicative of a great poem :)

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 12:29:00 PM
    Very impressed with eord imergy nicely done poet

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 9:22:00 PM
    This is just awesome. I really enjoyed it. thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 4:35:00 PM
    Impressively refined work, nette! Your verse contains a hidden dancing rhythm; you dance through it, from start to end. Proudly well versed poem! Congratulations! G.

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  1. Date: 7/26/2013 4:22:00 PM
    With momentos such as these, you make me want to believe in infinity dearest friend, I applaud you for scribing magic, None else can be performed as well as this, love xxx

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 2:48:00 PM
    Ps., I Love Your Beautiful Title. *

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 2:46:00 PM
    † I Love These Vibrant I Might Say Wonderful Images As Also Her Metaphors, Beautiful Nette. One To Be Twined And There Is No More Than, These Roots Of Jesse ? Beautiful In Creative And Unique. Love, John

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 2:35:00 PM
    This write says so much within its confines! You write so magnificently my friend! I believe that your have written probably the best lore I've ever read before Nette! This is such an awesome romantic poem! I really enjoyed reading this lovely piece this afternoon! What a brilliant poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 1:47:00 PM
    Stunning & intoxicating lines. Reach those stars...