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Below is the poem entitled connections which was written by poet Mel Doherty. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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connections

How is it that energy and life are transmitted
between people in love?  What forces are in 
play when two people embrace?  There is 
nothing in the world more comforting than
a sincere hug from someone that loves you.

The connections we make with each other
seem so powerful – and yet in some circumstances
we find it easy to dispose of each other almost
as out of a desire for convenience.  Knowing this
and the pain it brings we still play the strings of
each other’s emotions.

So the symphony of love has many movements,
some to stir us, some to scare us, some to assuage 
our fears, some to simply confirm that we are still
alive.  But mostly I think love gives us something
beyond ourselves to live for.   That connection to 
each other is the essence of human existence, 
without that connection we would simply be 
animate creatures in an inanimate world.

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  1. Date: 3/16/2014 12:10:00 PM

    MEL, :) It was nice to see your poem featured in the poetry soups, home page this past week. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever *LINDA

  1. Date: 3/15/2014 10:14:00 PM

    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Read and enjoyed it, mel

  1. Date: 3/11/2014 10:12:00 AM

    Mel, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. I'm always enjoying The Soups top picks of the week. Take Care ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 10:05:00 PM

    This reads like an essay you had to do in high school about "connections".Its major fault is that there is not "context". Who is loving whom? You can't say that love scares us. Some people love strawberries but they are not sacred by them. Too many questions in this to call it a well written poem. Its more like an unfinished essay.

    Doherty Avatar Mel Doherty Date: 7/26/2013 1:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for your comments. It is what it is. I believe poetry should make you think - we all have questions about life and love - few have answers. I go in search of my own answers - perhaps that's best for me. Some like you may have a better method - to each his own. Thanks again.