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DESERVING A KISS

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DESERVING A KISS

                                                     deserving a kiss
                                             surely mind becomes upset 
                                             when one's cool heart miss 

                                                  gummy kiss of wife
                                         so sweet and so nice that warms
                                                 invites deep sleeping

                                                 Kiss's always of love
                                           hides in for loved one's pain
                                                   it's a kind of bliss

                                                   Dirty feeler's kiss
                                                may be anybody else
                                                   better it's to miss   


"A Kiss is just a kiss" Poetry contest

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  1. Date: 8/12/2013 4:06:00 PM
    lovely BL the sensuality flows out Shadow x smiles

    devnath Avatar bl devnath
    Date: 8/14/2013 12:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot, loved always, bl
  1. Date: 8/11/2013 1:14:00 PM
    love them all BL., mostly i enjoyed the last one... dirty feelers... :-) always~ Linda

    devnath Avatar bl devnath
    Date: 8/12/2013 9:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks........, for your nice comment. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 8/8/2013 4:52:00 PM
    A kiss is sometimes all it takes and sometimes it can cause a problem. It all depends how it's done. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla

    devnath Avatar bl devnath
    Date: 8/10/2013 10:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    A lot of thanks to you my friend for your comment. Sorry for late. am busy now a days and hardly find time. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 8/2/2013 2:19:00 PM
    i truly am a student of your wonderful poetry

    devnath Avatar bl devnath
    Date: 8/3/2013 1:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi! my sweet friend, you are always my master. Ha ha...., loved your inspiration. Always, bl
  1. Date: 7/30/2013 10:54:00 AM
    ohhhh, the many laguages of a kiss done in a most unique way... well, well, i like the gummy one best, bl.. terrific!..) huggs

    devnath Avatar bl devnath
    Date: 7/30/2013 10:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks for your nice comment. Loved always, bl.
  1. Date: 7/26/2013 12:30:00 AM
    I really liked that last one. Yes, it's better to miss that one!!

    devnath Avatar bl devnath
    Date: 7/26/2013 9:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot for your comment. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 7/25/2013 3:29:00 PM
    - Your "suggestion" is a good choice! - Good luck in the contest my friend bl. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    devnath Avatar bl devnath
    Date: 7/25/2013 4:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks for your comment and for wishing me good luck. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 7/25/2013 10:35:00 AM
    Interesting way to go for the contest..Reads like a winner..Thanks for the visit..Sara

    devnath Avatar bl devnath
    Date: 7/25/2013 11:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    A lot of thanks from my heart, my sweet friend. Loved always, bl