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Weak minded is my tag,
You foresee failure in me.
I haven't had a reason to brag,
A loser I'm bound to be..

The greatest love,
Was in my vivid imagination,
I grasped it with my faith's glove,
But it slipped from life's conviction.

A sense of pride is in need,
But I can't while I walk in your shadows.
I were to remain wrong even in a good deed,
I'm filled with sorrows..

Why do I feel so sad?
I can't fight the feeling,
Of not being good but bad,
I seem to be crawling or kneeling...

A taste of appreciation is rare,
All I ever did was love you,
But you filled me with fear,
Crisis is what remained true.

I ask for a second of summer,
To pause from the shiver,
Whilst the cold lurks around the corner-
This agony extends to  a nile river.

I fell in affection,
But I remained the blame,
I yearned for protection,
But agony became less tame.

Confusion ruled my world
Threats adorned my thoughts
I lived a story which was not told
But succeeded from all your plots....


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  1. Date: 7/25/2013 8:02:00 PM

    I really loved the flow of your poem thabo and contents therein is very strong.Welcome on board.

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 4:19:00 AM

    - Hello new member: Thabo. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 9:34:00 PM

    No one wishes to live a life destroyer by others. you did well Thabo, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* SKAT

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 8:25:00 PM

    Thabo, hope you get out of the negative mood. , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@