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  1. Date: 4/7/2014 9:59:00 AM

    Hi Anne, I see you are back for a visit to the soup. I hope you are well.

  1. Date: 2/28/2014 11:32:00 AM

    Absolutely brilliant. Thanks for making my day. I have found it pleasurable to always begin the weekend with Poetrysoup because poets like you and poems like this do not disappoint. Have a lovely weekend

  1. Date: 1/4/2014 12:54:00 PM

    Good morning Anne, I hope this not finds you in good spirits.Hugs Rick.

  1. Date: 12/24/2013 4:29:00 AM

    Anne, --Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 10:41:00 AM

    A good one Ann and well penned. Kudos to u. Love alwaz, Based on Belief

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 4:51:00 AM

    soup mail. ..

  1. Date: 11/29/2013 11:13:00 PM

    You are an awesome writer dear one kudos to u! I enjoyed dis gem. Love alwaz. Based on Belief

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 8:52:00 PM

    Well written poem Anne:)

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 1:14:00 PM

    A Purgatory of consciousness. Descriptive and laconic. G.

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 8:00:00 AM

    I know how that feels Anne, secrets can torture you no end! Beautifully worded, I especially like the last line. And thanks for stopping by to read my poems, your kind words are a great motivation! loads of love to you, stay blessed! XX

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 5:07:00 PM

    Hi Anne, Sometimes It's hard to keep a secret when it may hurt to reveal it...Nice write...Thanks for visiting my work earlier.. Your friend, Ken

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 7:19:00 AM

    Good morning Anne, so nice to have you back at the soup spreading smiles. Hugs Rick.

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 5:28:00 AM

    This is a very beautiful sad poem my dear friend Anne. Another excellent poem indeed which I love reading this evening. Thank you so much again for sharing and belated hearty congratulations on your win. I see congrats comments below. I'm so sorry for the late expression. love lots and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 1:43:00 AM


  1. Date: 9/20/2013 1:41:00 AM

    Excellent write!

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 11:49:00 PM

    very deep and dark words. full of despair and pain. good job

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 8:34:00 PM

    Hi Anne, This is wonderful!!!

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 7:36:00 PM

    Did you mean roll off her tongue? Enjoyed reading this one again. Hugs Rick

  1. Date: 8/28/2013 5:03:00 PM

    Some secrets are best buried, if it does not benefit you to tell it and hurts another, sometimes best to not tell it. Awesome write and win! Hugs

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 2:32:00 PM

    - Perfect for the contest ..... you won with your amazing poem, congratulations! - Well deserved! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 4:41:00 PM

    I really like they way you've expressed secrets in this one. Very well written. Congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 2:44:00 PM

    A nice win Anne, ....... congratulations!!! Love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 7:35:00 AM

    congrats on your win Anne

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 6:35:00 AM

    Anne, CONGRATULATIONS''' Thank you for the lovely entry.:-) When you have time enjoy the winners and my sweet blog * Called "The Liberty Bell" Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... PS... stop by my newest poem if you like. "Summer Rain" XOX-love Linda

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 6:08:00 AM

    A friend of my once remarked that these feelings of anger eventually turn to guilt as we turn them upon ourselves. A very bad situation to be in. I just love your work--it is incredibly inciteful. You have a heart of gold.

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 5:28:00 PM

    Strong work you have scribed. Grabs the readers hand and brings them into the poem. Love your work. Xxxx Michael

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 8:30:00 PM

    secrets always come out in the wash, nice one Anne,,,, thank you for coming to read my The Great Swan ;} ,,, I shall have to read the other 3 now ;}

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 10:55:00 AM

    Secrets can be dangerous things, they hold us captive within the constraints of our own minds. Well expressed.

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 10:57:00 PM

    Said it all in just a feel lines. Perfect! Nice to read your poetry this early in the morning ;)

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 3:37:00 PM

    You contain quality in your writing. Congrats. G.