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  1. Date: 8/14/2013 7:46:00 PM
    A very fluid read—an enjoyable rhythm to the poem, and interesting details to draw the reader in!

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 6:29:00 PM
    Really beautiful my friend.I left you for two weeks and this is what you do.Oh fantastic!

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 5:24:00 AM
    Great work using a line from an old song..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 4:40:00 AM
    an yet i only have to close my eyes and i will be seeing you....

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 8:47:00 PM
    You have selected a graceful and delightful piece here my friend! I really loved the fact that you have presented this loving work, such a grand scene!!

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 6:49:00 PM
    What a beautiful piece of writing, well done Rose, I always enjoy your stuff....Peter

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 4:19:00 PM
    Absolutely heart-warming! There is a distinct hit between "find" & "seeing" here in this piece. Excellent!

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 4:15:00 PM
    One of my favorites......I can hear the music. :)

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 3:47:00 PM
    Stand by me... Is what pulled me in to this fabulous write. :o) xxx

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 3:25:00 PM
    hey, isn't this Frank Sinatra!! Always loved this song.

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 12:21:00 PM
    Simply beautiful, Mystic Rose. The repeition goes well in this write. Loely stuff. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 12:20:00 PM
    ohhh, vie.. just what i needed to serenade my day. an allyime fav of my dad... you have a sentimental, lovely soul!..:) huggs and thanks