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Until we meet

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Below is the poem entitled Until we meet which was written by poet Laura Mckenzie. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Until we meet

He walked away
She smelled his sweet kiss on her all-day
He recalls the mood they build together
A rush of love so gentle like a feather
Fluttering in the breeze all warm and glowing
Two lovers threads gathered and sewing
Quiver and blush with a childish ache
Alive in the moment of a human trace
Trance and defining the line of your face
All kept in its cozy place
Pluses reminiscent and rich of fire 
A steady light of love marked by desire  
Fragrant and weary eye and a state of reminisce
What a thought the mind plays after such a kiss
Hearts wanting and wanting so is the evening haunting
Breathe gentle without hesitation loves cruel daunting
This quiet place where the fire still burns
Dreaming of tomorrows when he returns
Eye to eye with a sheer passionate madness of delight
Watching the skies capture the night

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  1. Date: 8/5/2013 6:14:00 AM
    Laura, congrats on your well deserved victory. G.

  1. Date: 8/1/2013 5:02:00 PM
    subject: His kiss, Until we meet, Lonesome rider Laura : Such passion !, a hopeless romantic !, the angst of love so eloquently woven into the tapestry of ( I do believe ) your life’s journey and I only wish I had a fraction of your genius . Bill .

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 9:55:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

    Mckenzie Avatar Laura Mckenzie
    Date: 7/28/2013 9:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You !
  1. Date: 7/27/2013 5:27:00 PM
    Laura so moving love it congrats on fine win Shadow x smiles

    Mckenzie Avatar Laura Mckenzie
    Date: 7/28/2013 9:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!
  1. Date: 7/27/2013 1:44:00 PM
    Hi Laura, congratulations with your surprising winning poem in 'Giorgio Veneto' contest. always~ LINDA

    Mckenzie Avatar Laura Mckenzie
    Date: 7/28/2013 9:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    it surprised me to thanks!
  1. Date: 7/25/2013 5:22:00 PM
    Very romantic dear lady

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 10:51:00 AM
    "She smelled his sweet kiss on her all day"...funny thought: Were you walking around outside all day with your lips puckering up to your nose? =) This was a very charming piece!

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 10:14:00 AM
    Lovely poem, enjoyed a lot. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 8:22:00 AM
    Bravo! Very good verse. G.

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 9:18:00 AM
    Your an awesome writer Laura, I believe the chandelier has come down, bless your beautiful light, love xxx