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will i

will I...see you again?
Now in a grave,and then a 
friend.
Broken dreams,a heart to 
tend.
Will I...know when the time 
comes.
Is it right or wrong?the 
feeling I get when I hear your 
song..
I'll never know..how fast or 
slow.
The time it takes,to finally go..
Suicide,that's a no.
Contemplated many 
times,and when I do that's 
when it shines.
Eyes open,but lights blind.
Will i....i will not.

For Ariel,and anyone feeling 
suicide is the only way out..its 
not.

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  1. Date: 8/13/2013 10:11:00 AM

    No it is not the answer, live is so precious , each day is a blessing, no matter how hard our trials and tribulations get, we have an escape route, our Lord Jesus, dealing with our issues, makes us stronger gives us the courage and will to go on, great read and great message, blessings sueellen

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 9:02:00 AM

    this is possibly a great song ..I like this.

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 7:57:00 AM

    it's not no matter how tough things get we gotta keep trying

    martinez Avatar paul martinez Date: 7/24/2013 3:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Indeed we do..ive contemplated and attempted but I think about what my friend went through.and I just know its not the way..its like she whispers to me sayin not to go there..
  1. Date: 7/23/2013 11:11:00 PM

    ps... you are right, suicide is the easy way out... say NO NO! Life is the key. and no one should allow these feelings to take over... if ever the case, you know some one like this... please talk to them, and show them writing helps... take care... always~ PD

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 11:09:00 PM

    Paul, I'm adding you on my favorite list.. I will keep a close eye on you in hopes you enjoy it here. I am happy to know my daughter got you to join the site.. continue to post, if you ever need a tour around here.. don't be shy in asking... take care... cause Unicorns Rule..LOL, i said that to be silly... always~ PD...

    martinez Avatar paul martinez Date: 7/24/2013 3:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well thank you,and I appreciate you reading this poem..take care as well
  1. Date: 7/23/2013 8:24:00 PM

    I enjoyed your words! Laura

    martinez Avatar paul martinez Date: 7/24/2013 3:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks