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BANGED PENDULUMS

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BANGED PENDULUMS


Just when twilight and dawn finally meet in the quiet passage of breaths released... there in that moment, I witness a thousand wishes dancing through the shadows of my mind, each and every one in the form of chiaroscuro marked by restless eclipses black to white. The yearning streaks of a journey creating long and endless days born from arrival and death of flowers as season's rhythms cross the border etched on zodiac runes : a pathway dictated by calibrated blows of a horn trilling spaces in moments caught in the web of hours, to seize glimpses held by ticks of banged pendulums. I find myself wrapped so tightly in woven memories and places that I can hardly breathe or pause when a traffic of past, present chapters slices the flow offered by life as chain-link of minutes quickly grinds collecting people and milestones along railways, while I desperately try to escape the rising and falling by moon-sun, endlessly bartering for more grace... dear time, you steal my " now" through your eternal, impertinent glide. Giorgio V's Surprise Me Contest by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 8/5/2013 6:06:00 AM

    Nette, congrats on your well deserved victory. G.

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 9:19:00 PM

    Yes, time is a master thief. Congratulations Nette. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 8:21:00 PM

    Congratulations on a well-deserved win in the "Surprise Me" Contest, Nette! Awesome last stanza! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 5:11:00 PM

    hi Nette congrats on fine win Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 1:37:00 PM

    Hi Nette, congratulations with your surprising winning poem in 'Giorgio Veneto' contest. always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 11:21:00 AM

    "in the quiet passage of breaths released".......oh my......that one line and you had me in your poem with my heart!

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 10:50:00 AM

    I AM AN ADMIRING FAN OF YOURS... not just by this poem I enjoyed so much reading it .. again and agian.. wrapped tightly in woven memories.. aahhhhhhhh Congrats.

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 9:17:00 AM

    Very expressive winning work that you have penned..Congrats...Sara

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 7:34:00 PM

    Congratulations on a great win... Well deserved... Hugs..... Jake

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 6:28:00 PM

    Your usage of words are played out in this wonderful Lyric. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 6:06:00 PM

    You certainly banged the pendulums of time in this one. Congratulations on your win: This poem is fabulous and going in my faves :)

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 5:38:00 PM

    Oh this is really nice with such beautiful words! :)

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 8:32:00 AM

    what i witness is not a poem, written with time on a prism, wisdom not what in the making, its in wicked wheel of telling. my humble thanks for sharing a prized filled amazing poem.

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 6:52:00 AM

    um I like this your stir ones emotions with this piece! Laura :)

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 7:57:00 PM

    I've not read your writing until now. I was persuaded to do so by your wonderful blog bio, which I read while wishing Anne-Lise a fantastic birthday. I love this poem of yours, and I'll be sure to return soon to read more... Jack

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 7:04:00 PM

    I see congrats are in order- go figure! This is smashing! Well done, and yes- many congrats! Well deserved win indeed. :)

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 5:03:00 PM

    congrats Nette super win loved it xxx

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 3:45:00 PM

    This write is simply a beautiful write my friend! I really loved reading this timeless poem, I especially loved the title of this piece and how it was used within the poem! What a glorious write, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 1:03:00 PM

    You do amazing things with words. Always a pleasant ride.grateful for your presence. SuZ

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 1:03:00 PM

    Wow! an excellent piece. Once I felt near to it, but failed to adorn with beautiful words as you have done quite perfect. Enjoyed a lot. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 10:31:00 AM

    You've described how I feel today, bless your beautiful heart, today I'm living by the twelve step program, one day at a time, thank you my friend for this xxx

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 10:30:00 AM

    Interesting work..Time seems to go faster as we age..When we reach the penacle of the mountain and start downhill it swiftly goes by..Thanks for the visit to my work..Your presence there gives me encouragement..Sara

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 10:19:00 AM

    ... the time owns you ... you do not own the time my friend .... a poem which I much appreciated, it is beautiful and thoughtfully!! / / ........ You are good at baking ... cake looks amazingly good ..... Yes, it's my birthday .... thanks for congratulation. - I will come back to your blog throughout the day .... Thanks again sweet friend, Nette!! - Love / / always Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 10:12:00 AM

    You're an awesome writer Nette!!:)...It's like your dancing pen dances cha cha cha on those magical scripts...luv Godwins:)

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 9:35:00 AM

    There are many lines in here that I can deeply relate to. My heart knows the joy & pain of tehse lines. Phenomenal job!