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Eggshells

The chicken conquers
The shell
To inherit the fear
Of walking on them

By Scribe ML

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  1. Date: 9/7/2013 10:09:00 PM
    !!!

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 8:06:00 AM
    this is very clever! thanks for your comments on my poems - i appreciate them!

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 9:23:00 PM
    oh-ya. favorite. ~lori

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 11:44:00 AM
    Deep philosophical meaning in so few words-Super write

    WRITER Avatar NOVICE WRITER
    Date: 8/24/2013 2:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Vijay!
  1. Date: 8/22/2013 1:54:00 PM
    nice.

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 1:50:00 PM
    2 soupmails :)

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 5:40:00 AM
    This is such a unique take on walking on egg shells, tackling the chicken... I enjoyed this one, Marlon! Btw you gave me a scare with your comment, for a minute back there I though you were referring to your Soup acct! Sorry I wasn't able to hear you live on the show, my connection zonked out the time, and it's still slow now with non stop rains, but promise to listen to you in the archives soon! I can imagine what a strong voice you have! :)

    WRITER Avatar NOVICE WRITER
    Date: 8/19/2013 8:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol...no, the bank. I usually go through the drive-thru. You have a sweet and vibrant voice my friend. It was a pleasure to hear you ...Thanks!
  1. Date: 8/18/2013 10:32:00 PM
    Thanks for your friendship, Marlon....jimbo

    WRITER Avatar NOVICE WRITER
    Date: 8/19/2013 8:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    And I appreciate you also Jimbo!
  1. Date: 8/18/2013 2:31:00 PM
    Brief......but significant and filled with such insight! A metaphor for many things..!! ps.....another wonderful reading this morning on Drake's most recent show! You have a gift that should be heard. another enjoyable listening experience, Good work by all of you!

    WRITER Avatar NOVICE WRITER
    Date: 8/19/2013 8:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm floored... Thank you Carrie!
  1. Date: 8/15/2013 2:02:00 PM
    Wonderful, true words! :)

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 1:19:00 AM
    Congratulations! nice write

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 10:41:00 AM
    - Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage "Featured Poem of the Week" - Have a nice day, Marlon my friend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/10/2013 4:15:00 PM
    Simple and true...we all want it then when we have it we fear we mess it up or lose it. Still in love with your work. On another note...I was missing because I have a whole lot going on but I'll try to keep posting.

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 9:47:00 PM
    Awesome! Congratulations on being featured this week

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 9:04:00 AM
    Very interesting and unique poem. Its brevity made it very poignant. Great work!

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 7:03:00 AM
    cool I love it, wait a minute, if they have inherit the fear ,why did we??????lol,Ivy

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 7:30:00 PM
    Original, Marlon! I like it! jimbo

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 11:17:00 AM
    congrats on being featured shadow smiles

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 10:45:00 PM
    Really cool! This one got me thinking hard. I like a good poem. This is really good. You can still be a chicken even without your shell of comfort! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 8/1/2013 3:17:00 PM
    This write reminds me to be prepared for the challenges I accept Scribe - when One wishes for alot One must have the strength and resourcefulness to grow strongly - J.A.B. %

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