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Let my country awake

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Let my country awake

Let my country awake.............. When the mind is set without fear When the word speaks without lie When the heart is free from dirt When the knowledge earns without waste When the hatredness dies without curse When the love lives without trouble When the freedom showers without crush When the nature hugs without anger When the heaven throws its blessing without limit When the silent march forward to the freedom Let my country awake. Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved

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  1. Date: 11/3/2013 8:11:00 AM

    this would be a good guide for any country to follow. Great write Ravi =)

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 7:27:00 AM

    Excellent write Ravi, I so feel these words. Onelove ~<3~ cherie

  1. Date: 7/31/2013 3:44:00 PM

    And stay awake! Loved this one, Ravi.

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 9:12:00 PM

    A good write. I think all countries should wake up. One day I hope it happens. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla

    Sathasivam Avatar Ravi Sathasivam Date: 7/29/2013 1:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 7/26/2013 9:57:00 AM

    Ravi i need to live to see that comes true. Revolution! revolution! Lord Buddha and Our Savior should be here now. good time needy wish! Thank you.

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  1. Date: 7/23/2013 10:38:00 PM

    wow! Ravi, your words are powerful... freedom will speak ... LINDA

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  1. Date: 7/23/2013 2:58:00 PM

    Such a powerful write in honor of your country, this is outstanding- but it's because you wrote it- that's nothing new!

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  1. Date: 7/23/2013 1:44:00 AM

    Hi Ravi, a bit different poems from you. - Desire for freedom, honesty and good hearts is something that I wish for everyone. - Everyone has the right to have opinions, but no one has the right to violence or war. - A very good poem my friend! - Have a beautiful day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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  1. Date: 7/23/2013 12:10:00 AM

    Praise for your strong emotion for your country. I second that emotion!!

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