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BEYOND A TRILL

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BEYOND A TRILL




  Along resplendent lanes in groves of green 	
  In sundown’s mellow tinge aglow, we cruise  
  To grasp unto moon’s fingers so serene,

  Where we are charmed by lovebirds that amuse
  Who hum a rhapsody with lilting beats;
  Through gentle drones that seem to render blues 

  Like first theme song we wish breaths could repeat--
  Should we but fix past warmth beyond the sands 
  The way a glossy mist embraces heat.

  A constant vow that ever understands
  Our mild and fragrant chiming of daybreak,
  As spirits abide on Aurora's hands.

  When birds flutter a trill, then ignite
  This dulcet paradise we leave to night!



 Giorgio V.'s Contest: A Song Inspires A Poem
 Inspiration from Sergio Mendez's Song, ' Like A Lover'
 by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 2/10/2014 6:14:00 PM

    awesome win...SKAT

  1. Date: 1/9/2014 9:34:00 AM

    Congrats on your win Nette, This is a very good poem....Hugs....Roger

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 11:43:00 PM

    What a lovely poem and a fine win. Congrats on the win,nette

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 3:04:00 PM

    Oh yes.....I love this tribute......a wonderful song it is........and your poem does it justice! Lovely as always....you never disappoint!

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 11:04:00 PM

    Congrats on your win friend Nette...This is an excellent piece..your words are so deep and creative...just to let you know that I'm one of your fan :) Have a blessed weekend...hugs, Maria

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 6:46:00 PM

    Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 1:34:00 PM

    Congrats on your great winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 10:44:00 AM

    Nette, your poems are never common place and always original and beautiful!

  1. Date: 8/10/2013 4:17:00 PM

    Congratulations on a beautiful win, nette :)

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 8:36:00 PM

    Melodic and lovely Congratulations on your win. Love,Joyce

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 7:03:00 PM

    well done Nette.... SKAT

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 5:15:00 PM

    This is serene and calming to read.... I love your way with words. A beautiful poem, congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 4:32:00 PM

    Hey, Girl, you did it again. Awesome win. And good to see you in top three here! Congrats.

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 5:14:00 AM

    " Along resplendent lanes in groves of green In sundown’s mellow tinge aglow, we cruise To grasp unto moon’s fingers so serene" This is a very beautiful poem and you have captured a magnificent scenery.

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 1:53:00 PM

    Beautiful terza rima. Good luck in the contest! G.

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 7:51:00 AM

    Nette. This is very rhythmical and beautiful. I think it will do well in Craig's contest. OH, and I love the title!!!

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 11:40:00 PM

    Excellent. Nice poem. Enjoyed . Tfs

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 9:32:00 PM

    This is a very nice poem and very relaxing to read. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.....Lucilla

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 9:03:00 PM

    Craig will be spellbound by the splendor of this wonderful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this masterpiece that you have so illustriously written! I just love the night, and you write so eloquently about it, awesome Work!!

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 8:43:00 PM

    beautiful. good luck in the contest!

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 3:54:00 PM

    Nette such magic flows in your poems. A fabulous write. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 3:46:00 PM

    You're amazing Nette:D...Luv Godwins

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 2:59:00 PM

    I am sure that Craig will like this one..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the visit to my work..I appreciate your time spent there..Sara

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 2:45:00 PM

    - ... the one beautiful after the other .... they come floating from your beautiful inner ... - Crossing my fingers ..... good luck!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 1:49:00 PM

    Yes! This was a bit of a journey here. A strong embrace of the nighttime skies. You have a thing for the night. Awesome. :)