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  1. Date: 1/23/2014 2:47:00 PM

    Yasmin, a joyful read... Splendid imagery... As always.. Linda

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 6:01:00 PM

    nice win...PD

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 6:44:00 PM

    Lovely Yassie! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 8:53:00 AM

    A very worthy win! Congratulations.

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 2:34:00 PM

    Hi Yasmin, how am I missing all these old contest... congratulations... my sweet friend... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 3:54:00 PM

    Congrats on your great win..Sara

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 11:35:00 AM

    Way to go gal friend!! who's #1 why YOU! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 2:41:00 AM

    Congrats on yr win. Morgan

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 7:24:00 PM

    hi Yasmin, i like the gleaming greenery... a perfect win.... SKAT

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 3:28:00 PM

    Beautiful. Well done. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 11:51:00 AM

    This is drenched in beauty !! Congratulations, Yasmin !

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 4:23:00 AM

    - Congratulations on your winning poem, very enjoyable to read. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 7:15:00 PM

    hey, great win. BIG congrats, my sweet friend.

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 2:18:00 PM

    Just amazing! Very descriptive imagery! I could picture everything as I was reading this. Another great poem, Yasmin. And, thank you for your kind comments. It truly means so much! I have never been referred to as an angel, thank you for that! :)

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 5:50:00 AM

    Beautiful, beautiful. You use the most amazingly descriptive words that evoke such lovely images.

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 5:30:00 PM

    Your poetry is like a silent movie that I have to stare at and absorb. Love it!!! And your comments today. Xox Michael

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 2:38:00 PM

    Certainly a lively write from you here Yasmin, such possibility's as well as observations you furnish us with pleasure reading this today..'

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 1:49:00 PM

    I have one word for you my friend...Stunning!

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 2:40:00 PM

    wow, mists and brooks carrying scents every which way This is full of brilliant imagery, my friend. Very nice.

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 7:23:00 PM

    I love the smell of rain too! And I love love loooove falling asleep to the sound of it. This is such a beautiful poem! :)

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 8:42:00 PM

    I LOVE the smell of rain. One of the most comforting smells on this earth. Well done

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 3:08:00 PM

    mareeey, you float like a breeze scented with dew of your words... enchanting as always... :) huggs from priya..

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 6:35:00 AM

    hi Yasmin whaty a lovely flow this has, all the best Poetowen

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 1:46:00 PM

    you flow like the dew of day, mareeey.. love the very esssence of this piece--- crystal-clear and llting.. priya huggs to you!..:)

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 12:39:00 PM

    Btw,if it is for Rick's contest,then check the contest page.

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 12:38:00 PM

    Beautifully penned Yasmin!

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 8:42:00 AM

    Lovely verse. Your Zephyr and scented rain are beautifully expressed! Congratulations! G.

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 6:08:00 AM

    Wow, this is a wonderful write my friend, such an incredible poem Yasmin! I surely loved the line, "Curling wrinkled leaves" what a powerful piece that you have formed there! I really enjoyed reading this astounding poem this morning! What an enlightening write, quite a delightful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 5:48:00 AM

    - A beautiful way to embrace the delights of nature - beautiful poem my friend Yasmin. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)