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GOODY, GOODY GUMDROPS

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GOODY, GOODY GUMDROPS

GOODY, GOODY GUM DROPS .
 SHE FELL FOR IT LIKE A LOLLIPOP,
 YOU SUCEEDED IN FOOLING HER HEART,
 USED HER UP THEN RIPPED HER APART,
 YOU SHOWED HER HOW YOU WERE IN CONTROL,
 AND DAMAGED HER TRUST DOWN TO HER SOUL,
 YOU'RE SUCH A MAN! NOW BRAG AND CHEER,
 YOU'RE SUCH A PLAYER, IT'S SO CLEAR.
 NOW THAT YOU DISSED HER AND HAVE GONE AWAY
 SHE'S GOTTEN PRETTIER WITH EACH PASSING DAY.
 AND WHEN YOU SEEK HER LOVE ONCE MORE,
 SHE SHALL REMEMBER WHAT YOU DID BEFORE,
 YOUR PRIDE WILL BE HURT WITH ONLY YOU TO BLAME,
 BECAUSE YOU TAUGHT HER HOW TO PLAY YOUR GAME.

 KATEI
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  1. Date: 8/8/2013 7:12:00 AM
    Yes! A bit of vengeful redemption here. I like this! Though, as a man, I must say that it should say "You're such a boy! Now brag & cheer." I say this because a real man wouldn't do the things said in this piece. Boys only act that way. Nicely done!

    ramirez Avatar kathryn ramirez
    Date: 8/10/2013 12:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, for both your visit as well as your kind words, I couldn't agree more with you, Katei
  1. Date: 7/21/2013 1:43:00 AM
    LOVELY... this is how it should go. nice work........keep it up!

    ramirez Avatar kathryn ramirez
    Date: 7/21/2013 2:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks!!!! I appreciate the visit and compliments :) Katei