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Addicted Part 2

It Came back around and Said "I know you like to party"
Gave me a red cup, a little Coke and Bacardi
The Devil working hard, attaching himself to my body
He's scratching and clawing
The Work of my Angel, My Angel who has fallen
Firery Halo, I get weak then I'm calling
Bottles and Weed, A Black to Sooth the Thoughts
I am Already Happy, But in need to do and be with something that would keep me off my knee's
A life I choose to keep me at peace when I feel like nobody Loves me
Or is it just me?
When Will I become Free?
Addicted to You and Me
Into My own mind, some crooked thoughts and my Own Body
The Spliff is Killing my Eyes, Shutting down every inch of my body
"But You Like To Party"
Disrespecting Gods Body
Forgive Me Lord but this Depression is acting Naughty and I have to Kill It
But Now I am Addicted 
Now My Whole World Shifted 
On a Full Train with the same Gifted 
We Specially High headed to a place where Half Baked lives 
I'm Cooked Out and I Want Out 
Please Tell Me where my Escape is
This is All Killing Me and Nobody Knows it
I Just Might Overdose 

~I'M Addicted

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  1. Date: 7/21/2013 8:02:00 PM
    You've executed this one well also. Good job.

    Brooks Avatar Malcolm Brooks
    Date: 7/22/2013 1:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You, I Really Appreciate it :)