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ANTS

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ANTS

                             An octet of  naughty ants
                             With imperceptible chants
                          From the bushy  green garden
                     Marching towards the sweets hidden
                          Stealing  and sharing  the food
                                   Like a robin-hood
                            Always moving  in a chain
                                   Like a long train
                                Is  a treat to watch
                          Which no creature can match
                        Standing  and facing the barrier
                                  Like brave warrior
                          In their short life of existence
                          Showing  tons of resistance
                        And living  in a perfect harmony
                      For them every day is a ceremony.

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  1. Date: 7/21/2013 4:44:00 AM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup,enjoyed reading your work.

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 11:41:00 PM
    Hi Sudharsan, , -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 7:35:00 PM
    Sudharsan, lol, thought I was the only one who owned an ANT poem :-) your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT"

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 10:51:00 AM
    - This is a very well written poem, lovely for children. - You write well. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 7/18/2013 11:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)