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Trickle Down

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Below is the poem entitled Trickle Down which was written by poet Shadow Hamilton. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Trickle Down

Water flowing down
cascading it goes
bouncing over rocks
laughing gleefully
swirling so fast
down the mill
trickles through pipes
rushing out
into a pool
flowing onwards
sea bound
relentless journey
from source down
to the ocean
gathering body
getting mighty
until it flows
mingling with salt
its journey ended

written 07/17/2013

contest: Trickle Down Free Verse

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  1. Date: 7/19/2013 11:09:00 AM

    Hi Linda, it was a lovely journey from the source to the sea, you tell it so well. John

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/19/2013 4:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ty John for comments Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/19/2013 9:59:00 AM

    One can almost compare this to tears, too. Beautiful job.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/19/2013 4:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi Drake glad it moved you Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/18/2013 4:32:00 PM

    Well crafted nature poem here. You might want to send poetry to "The Avocet" which is a poetry mag - and website featuring nature poems. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/19/2013 4:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi Ty Matthew glad you enjoyed I am sending some off will look into Avocet too Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/17/2013 11:14:00 PM

    Excellent. Very creative work. Enjoyed. Tfs

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/18/2013 12:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi Ravi and ty so much most inspirational Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/17/2013 10:59:00 PM

    Very creative my friend.Good luck in the contest

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/18/2013 12:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    dearest M.M that means so much and ty for gl Love Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/17/2013 8:52:00 PM

    Ahhh-great idea and great poem....good luck....

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/18/2013 12:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi Donna ty for reading glad you like Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/17/2013 1:53:00 PM

    .... a long journey. - A enjoyable poem to read, Shadow. - I wish you good luck in the contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/17/2013 7:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ty Anne Lise glad you enjoyed ty for reading Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/17/2013 1:08:00 PM

    I need to check this contest out..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by, reading my work and taking time to comment...Sara

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/17/2013 7:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi Sara a fun contest ty for nice remarks and gl Shadow x smiles