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- Ice Cube - Cooling Effect -


                                    A beautiful and warm sunny day
                                     She is relaxing in her hammock
                           In her hand a glass of lemonade with ice cubes
                                           Takes up an ice cube
                                      holding it up against the sun
                                 The sun shines through so beautifully
                                Cold drops dripping between her breast
                         Keeps the ice cube against the sun until it disappears
                               Around her belly button a small cooling pond
                                Looking up at the sun, smiling and thinking
                          there are still five months to King Winter will come
                        Oh how life is lovely in the sunshine and her hammock







17.07.2013
A-L  Andresen :)

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  1. Date: 3/11/2014 7:12:00 PM

    Hi Anne-Lise, I think I could do with a few Ice cubes at this moment. What a lovely picture you do paint with this one. That Ice cube can paint a pretty hot picture, this I didn't expect. This is a good write. As always you tell it In your usual gentle way. The words just float along wonderfully. You always have such interesting and varied writes Anne-Lise. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/12/2014 2:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - It is seldom that's so hot in Norway, Mike ...... (a "dream image") - Highly appreciate your visit and comments - Thank you ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 7:31:00 AM

    I really like this one

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/17/2013 7:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for your visit and comment my poem,Carl ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/29/2013 9:22:00 PM

    So sensually refreshing. Very nice!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/30/2013 3:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Highly appreciate your visit and comments - Thank you, Jon ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/22/2013 12:42:00 AM

    Beautiful. I had never thought of Norway being hot enough to enjoy dripping ice. Your descriptions really bring us to that moment. Beautiful.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/22/2013 1:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - It's true ..... we rarely have such warm days in Norway. - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Gail. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/29/2013 7:20:00 PM

    Hi Anne Lise - Yes, "stopping to smell the roses" with an ice cube. Some of the most precious moments in life are those we share with nature. So good of you to share your moment with us. As always, love the way you observe life. - Gail

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/30/2013 9:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Gail. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/25/2013 12:56:00 PM

    I want to be there right now. You make it sound so appealing and wonderful... Betty

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/25/2013 1:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Betty. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/21/2013 10:30:00 PM

    Great write Anne Lisa, we are in our winter here, and I can't wait for our beautiful western Australian summer Peter

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/22/2013 12:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for your visit and comments Peter - welcome back whenever you want it! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/21/2013 3:29:00 PM

    I am cooled already reading this. Lovely one, Anne-Lise. Summer is my favorite season. I am enjoying it. Hope you will have a hot one soon :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/22/2013 12:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Summer is my favorite too ... but here on the west coast of Norway, there has not been summer heat for many years. - Thank you for your visit and comments Toquyen- welcome back whenever you want it! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/21/2013 11:17:00 AM

    Ahhhhh!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/21/2013 11:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for your visit and (small...lol) comments Duke - welcome back whenever you want it! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/20/2013 9:02:00 PM

    You painted a pretty picture with this one! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/21/2013 5:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for your visit and comments Matthew - welcome back whenever you want it! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/20/2013 1:46:00 PM

    love it Anne Lise, King Winter , nice line;} xoxo's

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/20/2013 1:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Pleased to have you visit, always faithful reader of my poems. - Thank you Debbie ! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/20/2013 12:21:00 PM

    Awesome poem friend Anne Lise :) Thanks for sharing..Have a blessed day... Maria :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/20/2013 12:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Pleased to have you visit, always faithful reader of my poems. - Thank you Maria ! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/20/2013 10:36:00 AM

    lovely write here, my friend

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/20/2013 10:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/20/2013 5:51:00 AM

    good poem i liked it

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/20/2013 9:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you J.I.K. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/20/2013 4:13:00 AM

    nice one . you .repeate some words which mar the quality ..my humble observation ..however enjoyed the poem !

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/20/2013 9:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Wahab. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/20/2013 12:03:00 AM

    I must confess I have almost done that whole poem.....well the ice cubes melting on the body thing........LOL sorry just had to say it.......loved it Anne Lise xx .....Shaz

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/20/2013 3:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Shaz. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/19/2013 8:41:00 PM

    ha love it... refreshing... enjoyed... and thank you for enjoying my poem... LINDA

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/20/2013 3:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Linda. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/19/2013 1:15:00 PM

    If an ice cube melted on my chest, I'd scream like a girl. Just sayin'. This was a wonderfully serene piece. And say NO to King Winter! =D

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/19/2013 1:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Drake. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/19/2013 9:10:00 AM

    this is VERY nice, my friend. I love this activity. (lying in the sun, and I think the ice cube thing could be fun too!!)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/19/2013 10:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your visit and your comments Andrea, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/19/2013 7:41:00 AM

    A very kicked back write Anne, like it.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/19/2013 8:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your visit and your comments Anthony, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/19/2013 6:16:00 AM

    super

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/19/2013 6:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Aseem. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/18/2013 9:19:00 PM

    Ahhh yes who hasn't done this???? Wonderful description . Really enjoyed this!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/19/2013 3:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Pleased to have you visit, always faithful reader of my poems. - Thank you Donna ! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/18/2013 2:48:00 PM

    hi anne, how did arild's birthday go?.. hope you and family had lots of fun.. :) huggs!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/19/2013 3:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - He had many pleasant greetings on the day from S-friends !!!
  1. Date: 7/18/2013 1:23:00 PM

    The ice cube is brilliant, as is the dripping. Was this you in Turkey? Lovely writing... Jack

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/18/2013 1:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - In Turkey I find the summer heat (not in Norway .... rain, rain and rain) ..... but it's just imagination .... lol. - Pleased to have you visit, always faithful reader of my poems. - Thank you Jack ! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/18/2013 11:01:00 AM

    Very unique and finely penned poem! Well done, Anne Lise! xoxoFaith

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/18/2013 11:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you my new friend Faith. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/18/2013 9:55:00 AM

    Beautiful poem enjoyed a lot. Very sweetly penned. Loved always, bl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/18/2013 10:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Pleased to have you visit, always faithful reader of my poems. - Thank you bl ! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/18/2013 3:37:00 AM

    Ahhhhhh.....lovely! Ice cubes do the trick, Annie Lise. What a pleasurable way to cool off! :) Lovely write. Me? I like to cool off by pointing the nozzle of the water hose straight up into the sky and catching the downpour with upturned face. I get carried away sometimes and get drenched. This summer....I haven't done much of that! :( Lovely piece!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/18/2013 4:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - No, we have not had such a warm and lovely summer ... yet!!! - Still waiting for summer in Norway!! (It is many years since we had a really hot summer here on the west coast of Norway) - Pleased to have you visit, always faithful reader of my poems. - Thank you Eileen ! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/17/2013 11:28:00 PM

    Excellent. Enjoyed your wonderful poem. Lovely. Thanks for sharing with me.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/18/2013 3:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Pleased to have you visit, always faithful reader of my poems. - Thank you Ravi ! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/17/2013 8:55:00 PM

    I know exactly how you are feeling with this one. I was commenting today on how much i was enjoying the sun after the long, long winter we just had. Wonderful poem .love phyl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/18/2013 3:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Pleased to have you visit, always faithful reader of my poems. - Thank you Phyllis ! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/17/2013 8:45:00 PM

    As the sun blazes now days it doesn't take long for that ice cube to melt completely! It really doesn't take very long! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening my friend! What an astounding piece, Great Work!!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/18/2013 3:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Pleased to have you visit, always faithful reader of my poems. - Thank you Russell ! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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