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What are you doing

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What are you doing

What are you doing when you smile at me? 
While holding me close, you look so happy 
What are you doing when you kiss my lips? 
So soft and so warm, I'm free falling like this
What are you doing when you hold me together, you make me feel so complete
My mind is exploding while my heart skips a beat
What are you doing when you grab my hand? 
While your walking with me across the sand
what are you thinking when your eye catches mine, the waves splashing in the background 
I can't believe the love that we found 
What else can i say when you tell me you love me, i can't believe how great this is going!
What are you doing? 

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  1. Date: 7/16/2013 12:59:00 PM
    - Chelsy, a beautiful poem. - Thank you - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 11:08:00 PM
    Hey Chelsy, I love this write! :o) Sounds like L-O-V-E :o)