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Fighting Back

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Fighting Back

Wonder how I get the pain inside of me,
Is this what I wanted?
yes, of course it is

Feel the pain from inside out
Feel your heart burst..
And your lungs collapsing
Stop the air..
Stop the life...
Stop the heart within the dark inside

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  1. Date: 8/2/2013 7:07:00 AM

    I echo Tim's comment. Poetry can have a profound healing affect if we have the courage to express our emotions. It appears you have the courage.

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 6:18:00 PM

    I get the feeling of festering rage. You've painted some painful images. Well done :)

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 3:29:00 AM

    hi Skyler, welcome here! About your poem i feel how hard to shout the wrath inside, the doom that covers your heart for the pain made by somebody kills your soul softly. LOL nice poem, good job!

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 5:17:00 PM

    - Who wants pain ..... pain is a painful feeling. - Well written - Wish you all the best .... no pain! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 9:47:00 AM

    Yes indeed Skyler...Let it rage, let it explode, let the tears flow and the dark inside will eventually give way to the light, and you can do all of that through your poetry, so keep writing!...VERY nicely done - Tim

    Swan Avatar Skyler Swan Date: 7/18/2013 2:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm glad you enjoyed my poem :-) ~<3 Sky (/^-^)/