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Storm

 It gives a fearful feeling my world will collapse
 The tree trembles cannot hold the rough
 Strong wind blows with a cascade rain  
 Storm doesn’t seem to seize 

The tree trembles cannot hold the rough
 I am not a banyan tree to withstand your storm
 Storm doesn’t seem to seize
 I do not know how to walk on the weather you chose

 I am not a banyan tree to withstand your storm
 Strong wind blows with a cascade rain  
 I do not know how to walk on the weather you chose
 It gives a fearful feeling my world will collapse


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  1. Date: 7/20/2013 10:39:00 AM
    In answer to your question, you are a woman within the storm of a rocky volatile relationship feeling out of control, hoping that your roots are as strong as those of the Banyan tree so that you will not be swept away. You feel the world around you is falling apart.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/20/2013 4:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Did I miss anything???
    gunatillake Avatar manel gunatillake
    Date: 7/20/2013 10:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you yes
  1. Date: 7/19/2013 7:48:00 AM
    Good morning, enjoyed reading a second time. I hope you have a most excellent day.

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 11:20:00 PM
    Excellent. A truly magnificent write about storm. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 12:48:00 PM
    A most excellent Pantoum, your best one ! I am proud of how you have developed your technique. A truly magnificent poem.

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 9:19:00 AM
    - Storm .... powerful experience. - Very well written Manel! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)