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PERSPIRATION

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PERSPIRATION

I'm lying sunning myself the heat on my golden baked skin makes me languid I sip at a glass of wine letting it slip down my parched throat my back is turned to you I needed privacy with my thoughts you lightly touch my nape and trace my spine down to where the g-string now wet with perspiration unsuccessfully tries to cover my modesty I hold my breath hoping that you would explore further but you stop reluctantly I turn to look at you the *rain spider looks back at me perspiration ice cold on my naked skin
*rain spider: similar to the tarantula, but non-poisonous

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  1. Date: 7/18/2013 5:22:00 AM
    WOW-- great evocative imagery-- yes, I can identify with the lazy, warm days.. sipping wine and daydreaming--- what a rude awakening when shattered by a rain spider--- huge creepy thing that it is.

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 8:33:00 PM
    Oooh! this sounds scary, Su! Especially when you mention tarantulas. LOL! I don't care for spiders, not even the tiniest ones needless to say tarantulas or rain spiders. I haven't heard of rain spiders...I must read up about them. Love, x Annalise

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 2:55:00 PM
    this is really a cool poem!! What a twist at the end!

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 3:37:00 AM
    .... enjoying the day... good luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Richards Avatar Suzette Richards
    Date: 7/15/2013 3:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sorry - PS mixed up the reply.... Thanks, Anne Lise. Wishing you a fine day as well. X
    Richards Avatar Suzette Richards
    Date: 7/15/2013 3:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    OK... I hear you, Jag. I will enter another one for the contest. Thanks for the heads up. :-)
  1. Date: 7/15/2013 1:15:00 AM
    Su, It's more romantic than funny, a turn-on, hugs!!