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- Drugs - Devil's Last Words


                                          Pain and betrayal
                                          It is so easy to say:
                                          Time will heal all wounds
                                          The soul and heart is empty
                                          Do not ask me to go ahead
                                          A worn out body, but still young
                                          Can feel my blood fizz
                                          but do not feel alive
                                          Hope disappeared
                                          Promises were broken
                                          Tears
                                          Yes, I know
                                          Can no longer look you in the eye
                                          I have failed
                                          Do not deserve your consideration
                                          I hate myself and my miserable life
                                          One time I was real
                                          Now a shadow of myself
                                          Dishonest and a disgrace
                                          Leave me alone
                                          Give me money for my last needlestick







12.07.2013
A-L  Andresen :)


(2nd place in the contest)

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  1. Date: 3/7/2014 6:17:00 PM

    Hi Anne-Lise, this is different for you, a most interesting write . Drugs, they destroy those who come into contact with them, as your words so wisely convey. This is a most impressive write Anne'Lise. I tried drugs once, you know, everyone else was doing it. Once was all, I don't need drugs to get away from this world and its problems. I have my own imagination. An excellent write my Friend. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/8/2014 5:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for the nice and positive visit - greatly appreciate your words, my friend Mike ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/1/2014 1:53:00 AM

    An excellent piece my dear friend Anne Lise. My huge congratulations on your well-deserved win! Biggest hugs! love lots, Leonora

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/1/2014 5:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely greeting, Leonora. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/1/2014 1:31:00 AM

    A powerful emotional imagery this piece shows...... Congrats for your win! :-)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/1/2014 5:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely greeting, Teddy. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/1/2014 12:54:00 AM

    an excellent topic. What was the motif? Philosophical? congrats for your win, sweetie.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/1/2014 5:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - - - Life,Andrea !!! - Thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely greeting. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/28/2014 7:47:00 PM

    I was very impressed with this dark and dramatic poem. This was expressed so well, and I could feel the emotions coming through in every line. Great work, Anne-Lise! Congratulations on your win, as well! :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/1/2014 5:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely greeting, Kelly. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/28/2014 11:36:00 AM

    nice win Anne Lise............SKAT

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/28/2014 11:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely greeting, Skat. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/28/2014 8:41:00 AM

    Very impressive poem. Congrats on the win, anne

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/28/2014 11:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely greeting, Dr. Ram. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/28/2014 8:31:00 AM

    Congrats Anne on the win . A brilliant one indeed.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/28/2014 11:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely greeting, Kayod5 - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/31/2013 3:03:00 AM

    Letting go...one of fhe hardest things in life. Superb read.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/31/2013 3:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for the visit and comments, Alozor Michael. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 7:18:00 PM

    Addiction is such a hard road, with many different endings...well written. All the best -Kelli

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/30/2013 1:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for the visit and comments, Kelli. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/22/2013 6:30:00 PM

    The heartbreak of drug addiction. It knows no boundaries. I spent a lot of time in Norway when I was playing music and saw it everyday. Too sad. Great poem, form, content everything is excellent. I tip my hat to you. Kilmer

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/23/2013 2:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for your comments and visit, Stephen. - means a lot to get feedback. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/15/2013 2:23:00 AM

    This is a very nice poem, on a very sad / bad vise. Thank you for reading my Another Life" xo's ;}

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/15/2013 2:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for your comments and visit, Debbie. - means a lot to get feedback. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/11/2013 8:27:00 PM

    what can i Say? that its a storm, picking up speed, and strength, from every read, from America to India! China to Singapore. . . . Need I Say more. .. . ?

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/12/2013 1:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for your comments and visit, Danesh. - means a lot to get feedback. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/10/2013 9:34:00 PM

    Nice :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/11/2013 2:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for your comments and visit, Nadia. - means a lot to get feedback. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/2/2013 3:46:00 AM

    Pretty good description of the life for someone never in the never ending small circle of hell that it is. Nicely done. I'm glad for you and all who have never experienced it. That was me. Emphasis on was.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/2/2013 8:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for your visit and comments Brian - welcome back whenever you want it! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/25/2013 9:02:00 AM

    Have you ever used any drugs?

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/25/2013 11:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - No, but I know many people who have destroyed their lives with drugs. (I have worked as a nurse for 28 years) - Thank you for your visit and comments Nikola - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/22/2013 12:50:00 PM

    I Really like it! deep and True ~MJB

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/22/2013 12:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for your visit and comments Malcolm - welcome back whenever you want it! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/20/2013 9:01:00 PM

    What a sad tale you tell of a young person destroying his or herself. Very evocative! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/21/2013 5:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for your visit and comments Matthew - welcome back whenever you want it! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/20/2013 6:28:00 PM

    Wow Anne Lise, you really told it how it is here. These addictions do turn them into selfish people. That last line is crushing. Very well done. Take care, Richard

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/21/2013 5:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for your visit and comments Richard - welcome back whenever you want it! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/19/2013 7:55:00 AM

    Being drug addicted is a tragedy. Unfortunately, most of them do not feeel guilty for assuming drugs. They are poor people who has lost their mind with little hope to get out. You have tried to express ideal thoughts placing yourself in their mind. Appreciable

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/19/2013 8:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your visit and your comments Mario, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/17/2013 11:05:00 AM

    The honesty of this makes it beautiful.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/17/2013 11:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - This is not a poem about me ... (thankfully) - - Thanks for your visit and your comments Kathryn, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/17/2013 7:12:00 AM

    powerful piece Anne....nicely done

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/17/2013 7:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your visit and your comments Joseph, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/15/2013 9:15:00 AM

    Gosh Anne Lise, this is sad, but well written. Drugs never do anybody any good. One of these days I'm going to write another poem on drugs. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/15/2013 10:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your visit and your comments Lucilla, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/15/2013 8:40:00 AM

    Sad but true for too many... So very well done.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/15/2013 10:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your visit and your comments Carol, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/15/2013 7:49:00 AM

    now i understand!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/15/2013 10:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your visit and your comments T.S, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/14/2013 7:52:00 PM

    a sure deep poem. thank you for enjoying my SUNNY poem, lol ... Annelise. your a doll. xox~ SKAT

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/15/2013 3:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your visit and your comments Skat, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/14/2013 2:53:00 PM

    A sad reality which have become a common solution for pain..never realizing they re heading to uncurable pain.I love the wsy you write dear..Your poems touch base with reality.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/14/2013 2:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your visit and your comments Charma, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/14/2013 1:32:00 PM

    Anne Lise - This poem is wonderful and endearing! What a special relationship you and your grandchild share. Thanks for sharing this with us. - Gail

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/14/2013 2:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :))))
    DeBole Avatar Gail DeBole Date: 7/14/2013 2:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Anne Lise- Don't know why this comment was posted for the wrong poem. This was supposed to be for your poem about your grandson. Thanks for stopping by. - oxox to you! Gail
    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/14/2013 1:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - It must be terrible to be caught by the drugs or alcohol. - - Thanks for your visit and your comments Gail, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/14/2013 1:29:00 PM

    Hi Anne Lise - I always love your poetry because of your wording and the feelings that are always expressed from your heart. Wish people that are addicted could fast forward and realize that they are missing out on so many positive things in the world because of the feelings that are trapping them. - Always, a fan, Gail

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/14/2013 1:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - It must be terrible to be caught by the drugs or alcohol. - - Thanks for your visit and your comments Gail, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/14/2013 11:52:00 AM

    interesting ending

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/14/2013 12:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your visit and your comments Steven, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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