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Haiku 65

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Haiku 65

	
	
	
	
	
	
	
	Haiku 65
	
	
	taut threads of pain
	darkness behind my eyes
	clouds cry
	
	
	
	(Written for a friend.)
	
	
	
	

	
	
	

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  1. Date: 7/14/2013 1:00:00 AM
    wow, now THIS is haiku!!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/14/2013 8:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    A lot of pain though... Jack
  1. Date: 7/12/2013 10:19:00 PM
    Hello Sweet, Jack, I feel like haiku tonight... and by the looks of it... you have many to enjoy.... so please do not mind the smiles I will leave behind... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 10:19:00 PM
    ps... a sad thought, and imagery... :-( PD

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/12/2013 11:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    A sad friend...
  1. Date: 7/11/2013 6:05:00 PM
    Let it rain. But, the sun shall return. Great job!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/11/2013 8:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for reading my haiku, Drake... Jack
  1. Date: 7/11/2013 4:38:00 PM
    pain and grief in this Jack well written Shadow x smiles

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/11/2013 4:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the kind words, Shadow... Jack