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A Nursery Rhyme

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Below is the poem entitled A Nursery Rhyme which was written by poet Gabe Shelly. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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A Nursery Rhyme

Kill Kill Kill
Cut off a limb, put it in a pot--
Use Sweet n' Sour, it'll stink a lot


                               A Nursery Rhyme
                                           7/10/'13

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  1. Date: 7/12/2013 10:09:00 PM
    i would call this a twisted couplet...LOL...good job...Linda

    Shelly Avatar Gabe Shelly
    Date: 7/15/2013 7:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks. g.
  1. Date: 7/11/2013 10:17:00 PM
    This is completely different than what I was expecting when I read the title. I love it! Thanks for the interesting and surprising read, Gabe. :)

    Shelly Avatar Gabe Shelly
    Date: 7/12/2013 4:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks. g.
  1. Date: 7/10/2013 2:16:00 PM
    Talk about a brutal nursery rhyme! Haha I love it! Haven't read anything like this on the Soup before, I like it when I come across work like this that stands out and is AWESOME! Also, thanks for the constructive criticism on my poem- I would love to edit it, but considering that it's a limerick, it's hard to do so without ruining the meter it's supposed to be in... so I will leave it as is, but still greatly appreciate your feedback. :) Hugs!

    Shelly Avatar Gabe Shelly
    Date: 7/10/2013 4:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks. I'm glad you appreciate my criticism-- few do. g.