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Jive in a Beehive

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Jive in a Beehive

Doing the jive in a beehive
Can be detrimental to your life
Performing high kicks
With pointy toed flicks
Will cause the bees to sting your behind
 
 
 
 
07/08/13   Heather's "Make Me Laugh"  Contest  

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  1. Date: 10/22/2013 4:06:00 PM

    This is a clever and humorous write. I can just picture a tiny person trying to dance in a hive. Nice job Thanks for the awesome comment on my Habits poem. Glad you enjoyed it.

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 10/22/2013 4:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for commenting. Glad you found the humor
  1. Date: 9/30/2013 3:51:00 PM

    Sweet as honey! This was very fun and whimsical, and it put a smile on my face today! Great work, Karen!...Thank you for the kind comments, once again!

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 9/30/2013 4:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Kelly, glad you enjoyed this. Thank you :)
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 7:58:00 AM

    Funny limerick... great stuff... Terry

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 9/7/2013 9:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Terry, thank you for stopping by. :)
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 1:51:00 PM

    I'm so captivated by your writing that I didn't notice your straying from the rhyming pattern.... I found the humor over came the unintentional and resulted in a great little chuckle.... Love ya dearly.... Jake

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 8/29/2013 2:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I think I'll say away from limericks. It was fun to try it once though. Thankyou :)
  1. Date: 8/23/2013 3:44:00 AM

    Fun, simple, straight to the point and you can't ignore that metaphor, nice poem.

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 8/23/2013 6:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ha ha ... wouldn't ignore being stung on the behind for sure...thank you for reading :)
  1. Date: 8/22/2013 7:59:00 AM

    This piece made me tee-hee. Cute, clever; very fun piece to read :)

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 8/22/2013 8:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm glad you had some fun with it :)
  1. Date: 8/19/2013 6:06:00 AM

    lol...adored this one...most the summers wasps sunbathed on my car and I tried everything to dodge them when entering my car... I am glad they didn't sting my behind :)

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 8/19/2013 6:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Just doing a stab at a limerick. Glad you found it funny. Thank you :)
  1. Date: 8/11/2013 1:39:00 PM

    Love this poem with the surprise ending. Thanks for putting a smile in my heart and giving me a good belly laugh.

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 8/19/2013 6:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Jon, thank you for commenting and finding a smile. :)
  1. Date: 8/9/2013 7:15:00 AM

    HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA! Karen....I'll keep that in mind! How cute and funny! HUGS!!!!!

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 8/9/2013 8:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Eileen, thank you ... hugs back to you :)
  1. Date: 8/3/2013 5:54:00 PM

    Hee Hee! Got a kick out of this one! Or shall I say a "sting?" LOL!! Cleverly written!...Milt

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 8/9/2013 8:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Milt, thankyou for getting a laugh from my silly rhyme :)
  1. Date: 8/1/2013 3:02:00 PM

    Better to be stung than to be hung without fun - I absolutely adore bumble bees karen, hence this clever write is a tastey joy for me, and the moral is appealing as well - J.A.B. %

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 8/1/2013 3:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Justin, thank you for apprciatin my stab a limericks
  1. Date: 8/1/2013 12:15:00 AM

    and ya no ya alive....love it babe

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 8/1/2013 6:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Don, ha ha and thank you :)
  1. Date: 7/29/2013 6:06:00 PM

    I think I will pass on that kind of dancing *lol* Thanks for a bit of afternoon humor.

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 7/29/2013 6:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ha ha...try it you might like it ? Have a great afternoon:)
  1. Date: 7/29/2013 3:23:00 PM

    This is good and funny. Thanks for sharing and for reading my poem. Lucilla

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 7/29/2013 4:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lucilla thankyou very much :)
  1. Date: 7/29/2013 1:29:00 PM

    This is so very cute ;}

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 7/29/2013 2:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Debbie, much appreciated... :)
  1. Date: 7/28/2013 10:48:00 PM

    Ouch!!! Thanks for a belly laugh this morning. Good luck in the contest, Karen. Licia :-)

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 7/29/2013 10:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much :) Have a great day
  1. Date: 7/28/2013 3:52:00 PM

    Funny!!! If i ever jive, it will not be in a beehive...Thanks for those words of wisdom!! -heather

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 7/29/2013 10:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Heather ...much appreciated
  1. Date: 7/28/2013 1:42:00 PM

    Who cannot smile upon reading this gem?? So cute !!

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 7/28/2013 3:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for appreciating...:)
  1. Date: 7/27/2013 11:53:00 PM

    This is a fantastic limerick my dear friend, Karen. I love it and so enjoyed. It put smiles on my face. Thank you so much for sharing & your inspiring comments on my poem. Have a great day! love lots, Leonora

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 7/28/2013 9:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Leonora, thank you for your lovely comments and for enjoying my silly little poem ...hugs to you :)
  1. Date: 7/27/2013 11:13:00 PM

    Contesr? Sounds real.

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 7/28/2013 9:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    John, thank you ha ha :)
  1. Date: 7/27/2013 9:36:00 PM

    Lol you are Jive Talking....but I dig:) ..very cool poem karen!!! ...love it:0) ty4sharing....cherie

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 7/27/2013 9:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Cherie, thank you very much ha ha :)
  1. Date: 7/27/2013 2:51:00 PM

    having another chuckle here - congrats on all your wins : )

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 7/27/2013 2:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    jack, thank you for the acknowledgement. Much appreciated :)
  1. Date: 7/26/2013 6:57:00 PM

    LOL....Bees just wanna make honey... No jiving around in this hive... Great write, Karen.... Jake

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 7/26/2013 7:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Jake, glad your found the humor. Silly is as silly does... :)
  1. Date: 7/26/2013 6:43:00 PM

    Excellent! Very funny! Kilmer

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 7/26/2013 6:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Stephen, thank you for finding the humor :)
  1. Date: 7/25/2013 5:27:00 AM

    Interesting work that you have penned..Don't want to be around those bees..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 7/25/2013 7:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sara, I came up with this being silly with the grandkids... thank you :)
  1. Date: 7/21/2013 9:19:00 PM

    Short and sweet and nicely written, Very expressive on many levels. thank you for your comments also.

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 7/25/2013 7:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Cherl. thank you very much :)
  1. Date: 7/19/2013 9:52:00 PM

    I chuckled at this enjoyable limerick. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 7/20/2013 8:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Matthew, I appreciate your comments :)
  1. Date: 7/17/2013 7:29:00 PM

    !! I can picture this, so clearly, Karen....not a fun spot to be in...Great Limerick. Always, Annalise

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 7/18/2013 4:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Annalise, thank you for the nice comments on my poetry. Have a great evening :)
  1. Date: 7/16/2013 4:22:00 PM

    A very enjoyable read. Loved the energy... I'm all a Buzz after reading this one... LOL

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 7/16/2013 5:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Carol, glad you felt a little buzzzz...thank you for the sweet comment:)
  1. Date: 7/16/2013 12:04:00 PM

    Witty indeed! Love your limerick. :)

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 7/16/2013 5:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Anne, Thank you for the nice comments. :)
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