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clog dance

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clog dance


Amore, wrongful was his raging flame
that burned for thee and turned him to a coal
combustible attempts were put to shame
his ashes danced inside a shopping mall.

His chickens cry because their much loved sire
became a fool composing love sonnets
about deep burning detrimental fire
that cauterized his lonely French baguettes.

Love's catastrophic and caustic waves
electroshocked his nervous system, gal,
amaranthine his agitations rave
and jumps he like a bronco 'n the corral.

Inside the ring of fire performs his dance
with vanished logic and unfocused glance.

© G.V. 06-19-2013 All rights reserved



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  1. Date: 10/15/2013 3:26:00 AM

    I see a textbook sonnet here -- perfect in form and rich in vocabulary -- both well developed and used to their limits---- magnificently done, my friend..... Jake

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 2:55:00 PM

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  1. Date: 7/30/2013 2:54:00 PM

    I enjoyed reading your clog dance Giorgoo..Now its bedtime here..Goodnight