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Midnight Lover

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Midnight Lover

He pocketed the ring and sidled over
Temptation too much for this old rover
     When kissing wife “goodnight”
     Cold sweat beading and fright
Realising band lost at midnight lover

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  1. Date: 7/12/2013 6:20:00 AM

    oops!! Good one. Betty

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 3:48:00 AM

    Aha cool poem. Nice as a limerick. D midnight sure takes a toll on some! Pls read my latest poem too.

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 1:24:00 PM

    tickling me all over, su... this is a funhouse of a charade, ahhh men... glad you are still around... :) hugggs!

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 11:07:00 AM

    So the old rover roved one too many times huh?...HILARIOUS limerick also showing the pathetic side of these 'lover boys' who can't seem to keep it in their pants...Nice to hear from you again my friend! (Are you still gazetting in your gazette, Suzette?) - Tim

    Richards Avatar Suzette Richards Date: 7/9/2013 12:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I have written a few more poems in the Suzette Prime poetry form - all posted on my website. Enjoy :-)
    Richards Avatar Suzette Richards Date: 7/9/2013 12:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for the compliment, Tim. At my age, it is a case of rather late than never ;-)
    Ryerson Avatar Tim Ryerson Date: 7/9/2013 11:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It is also rather obvious that you are now in your poetry writing Prime, Suzette...
  1. Date: 7/9/2013 2:15:00 AM

    Su, Reminds me of something I heard once.., well expressed,.. happy i saw you in Carrie's comments box,.. how is life?, luv!! Jag

    Richards Avatar Suzette Richards Date: 7/9/2013 12:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Life is fine.... Making the most of it. :-) Thank you for asking, Jag.
  1. Date: 7/8/2013 1:35:00 PM

    Damn. What intensity & tension. The rise & downfall of temptation.

    Richards Avatar Suzette Richards Date: 7/8/2013 11:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Karma - There is always a price to pay ;-)