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THINK OF ME COME NIGHTFALL

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THINK OF ME COME NIGHTFALL



Think of me as the eyes of late nightfall crawling through a wafting sill where lone moon cuddles dimmed glow before she quietly slowly lays herself on a cradle of clouds as whistle of barn owl and incantations groans. When dusk explodes into ash upon fairways that lap, think of me mysteriously walking on the ledge of our winding grassland picking bluebells in wanderlust. And when candles snuff the lampshades think of me, like the velvet skin of dusk fall circling in a world of marbled thoughts until you etch the back of my spine to lullaby the sourness of truant dreams. The stars play game-spy with the wind rowing into a wave of dewy cruise; I enter into your own lenses, a search light that becomes the harbour of some peace while echoes of unknown voices speak... It is at this juncture when you, perhaps, might think of me lending a gentle taste of assurance that the next hours will stir a brightened sun. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Charlotte Puddifoot's 1st, 2nd,3rd Place Contest

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  1. Date: 2/21/2014 8:37:00 AM

    From nightfall to sunrise...you captured the magic in between...congratulations on your win nette...a wonderful wonderful reflection of yourself always spills out in your words

  1. Date: 2/14/2014 2:39:00 AM

    Congratulations on winning with this very descriptive entry.

  1. Date: 2/14/2014 2:30:00 AM

    A superb poem my very dear friend Nette! So love it and so enjoyed. Thank u so much for sharing! And, my hearty congratulations on your great win! Thank u as well for stopping by on my page. Sorry if my expression of gratitude comes only now. Always busy & just arrived home fr. 3-day Camp. Hope u're doin well. Mind me, w/ God's mercy d effect of protest in my place was a remote. Im stoppin by also to greet u & ur loved ones a very Happy Valentines Day! Wish u d best! love & misses u, Leo

  1. Date: 2/13/2014 7:37:00 AM

    Congrats nette again on another great win! It's very nice!! love you..

  1. Date: 2/13/2014 3:14:00 AM

    You remain my queen of poetry, congrats nette.

  1. Date: 2/13/2014 3:12:00 AM

    You remain my queen of poetry, congrats nette.

  1. Date: 2/13/2014 2:25:00 AM

    Wow Nette !! Wonderfully penned, n I liked the wanderlust !! Winner of winners!! Congrats on top win!!

  1. Date: 2/12/2014 6:49:00 PM

    Well-penned poem and congrats on the win, nette

  1. Date: 2/12/2014 11:40:00 AM

    Great free verse!! "circling in a world of marbled thoughts"!! So beautiful, Nette! Congratulations on your top win!

  1. Date: 2/12/2014 4:41:00 AM

    Congratulations once again nette xx

  1. Date: 2/12/2014 12:43:00 AM

    WOW no other superlative fits. Congrats. Ron

  1. Date: 2/11/2014 7:16:00 PM

    Congrats on your win... Beautiful. Verlena

  1. Date: 2/11/2014 4:46:00 PM

    I love this poem Nette fantastic pen ty for my place in your contest congrats on win hugs

  1. Date: 2/11/2014 4:45:00 PM

    I agree with Charlotte......those truant dreams are magnificent!! lovely piece!

  1. Date: 2/11/2014 4:32:00 PM

    nette, this is another beautiful piece from you, some exquisite phrasing such as "the sourness of truant dreams", and I love that last line...congrats on your win in my contest :)

  1. Date: 2/11/2014 4:25:00 PM

    Congrats on your win

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 10:03:00 AM

    congrats. great win. (:c Jenish

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 6:46:00 PM

    Nette, your poem is radiant and well deserving of #1 winner...lovely work :)

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 5:34:00 PM

    Congratulations Nette, a beautiful write and deserving of No 1 place. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 12:42:00 AM

    Another outstanding poem and masterpiece of yours my very dear friend Nette! I love it & so enjoyed! Thank you so much for sharing as well. MY BIGGEST HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR NUMBER 1 WIN! My biggest sweet hugs and cheers! Have a grace-filled Sunday there! love lots always, Leonora

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 7:32:00 PM

    awesome late night win.....SKAT

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 4:48:00 PM

    I have yet to read a poem of yours that didn't take my breath away. I love your writing. You clearly deserve winning this contest. congratulations! Jack

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 9:36:00 PM

    . Nette, enjoyed your late night poem. CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) :-) :-) in Nathan's contest... ALWAYS LINDA

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 8:22:00 PM

    thanks for the entry. and the #1 Nate

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 9:03:00 AM

    rate i must, seven i am saying, what a rush, when you came to me with this!

    Morgan Avatar Danesh Morgan Date: 8/12/2013 7:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Congrats on your win!
  1. Date: 7/9/2013 11:17:00 AM

    JUst Amazing Nette!!!Love this.

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 8:50:00 AM

    WOW.. this is a breathtakingly beautiful poem. Such an eloquent way of describing nightfall in a personal context.xx

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 6:41:00 AM

    Wow, wow, wow. This is breathtakingly beautiful. Straight to favorites. If I could rate 77 I would.

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 5:02:00 AM

    Excellent. Beautifully written Enjoyed, Tfs

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 1:45:00 AM

    very pretty.... good luck in the contest... PD

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