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Naked and Ashamed -Part 4-

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Naked and Ashamed -Part 4-

Ooooooh.... Oooooh....OoooOooh...

Open up my pane and seep in my pain
I weeped too long without you
Open up my pane and let me hear the train
So we can learn to see where our train tracks lead...so you won't see us blue 
Or stick to each other like wood glue 

Ooooooh.... Oooooh....OoooOooh...

Just watch the beautiful skies
As the sunset descends below the hills,
I can feel your hands, shaking from the cold and the chills 
I'll keep you warm
Just stay with me forevermore
So we can watch the birds soar
In the sun-drenched skies...
We'll never wave out goodbyes...
Just not yet...
So don't doubt and don't be upset
Or uptight, baby
Cause I'll hold you with passion and make you experience ecstasy 
We'll be abiding next to sea...
Meanwhile, we'll live our normal lives and look forward to vacation time
When that time comes, I bet it would be absolutely sublime 

Ooooooh.... Oooooh....OoooOooh...

Hey x3
You clothe me up...
What's up with you today?
I'm naked and ashamed
Turn the other way...
'Cause today is not the only day
I feel so damn afraid...
But hey x3
You make me feel whole
How was your day? 
Hopefully the sky wasn't a shade of gray 

Ooooooh.... Oooooh....OoooOooh...

I just wanted to say I love you so
I wanna see your sunlit, gracious glow...
Just so that you know...
You can cover up my nakedness 
And replace it with happiness 
You can cover up my shamefulness

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  1. Date: 7/13/2013 12:55:00 PM
    ...reading on...funny that you want to take care of this one and make everything OK. She can take care of you too. You have a lot of love inside of you. Go for the gold, my friend.