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Naked and Ashamed -Part 3-

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Naked and Ashamed -Part 3-

Ooooooh.... Oooooh....OoooOooh...
This shameful feeling drives me insane...should I get dressed into decent clothes? 
Am I sane? Tell me if I'm insane, I won't get mad at you...for your own opinions 
Just don't send out your friends or minions 
Ooooooh.... Oooooh....OoooOooh...
Hey x3
You clothe me up...
What's up with you today?
I'm naked and ashamed
Turn the other way...
'Cause today is not the only day
I feel so damn afraid...
But hey x3
You make me feel whole
How was your day? 
Hopefully the sky wasn't a shade of gray 

Ooooooh.... Oooooh....OoooOooh...
Walk away    
Don't call my name     
Don't choose my pathway     
I'm choosing the wrong lane      
Just open up my pane and let me devour your pain away...      
We welcome a new day    
You'll see wings gouge out of my Ribcage      
Don't freak out...it's gonna be okay      

I'm sick of holding these feelings of shame and rage 
Brewing inside of me...
but you brighten up my day...

Close your eyes...x3
Welcome a new day 

Ooooooh.... Oooooh....OoooOooh...
Hey x3
You clothe me up...
What's up with you today?
I'm naked and ashamed
Turn the other way...
'Cause today is not the only day
I feel so damn afraid...
But hey x3
You make me feel whole
How was your day? 
Hopefully the sky wasn't a shade of gray

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  1. Date: 7/13/2013 12:51:00 PM
    ...reading..., the feelings you have are very strong. This is tough. Sounds like you really have the hots for this one. These feelings are great!