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Naked and Ashamed -Part 1-

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Naked and Ashamed -Part 1-

Ooooooh.... Oooooh....OoooOooh...
Open up my pane and seep in my pain   
I weeped too long without you    
Open up my pane and let in some rain    
Shower down my face...so you won't see me blue     
 
Ooooooh.... Oooooh....OoooOooh...
I need some clothes to support me     
I need to embrace you to live my fantasy       
Ooooooh.... Oooooh....OoooOooh...
Turn away    
Don't look my way    
Don't look at me      
I'm not the sparkly sea       
As you can clearly see...        
I'm naked with shame        
There's no one to blame...       
but I...this humiliation remains the same      
 
But I must flee sooner than they think   
I need some time alone... To think... to ponder as I sink     
Into my sea of thoughts and paradise...     
I'm on a mission... To discover a previous prize      
Ooooooh.... Oooooh....OoooOooh...
If you blink, you'll miss the love scene in Romeo and Juliet   
That was made for us to see and experience for ourselves...      
Don't leave me on the shelves...     

Ooooooh.... Oooooh....OoooOooh...
Curiosity drives us to our feet...    
You make my heart beat      
In perfect rhythm... I appreciate your blessed benevolence (towards me)    
But I'll try to stay proper and discreet...     
I wish I could take a piece of your pure prudence (I want to watch you flee)     

Ooooooh.... Oooooh....OoooOooh...
Hey x3
You clothe me up...
What's up with you today?
I'm naked and ashamed
Turn the other way...
'Cause today is not the only day
I feel so damn afraid...
But hey x3
You make me feel whole
How was your day? 
Hopefully the sky wasn't a shade of gray

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  1. Date: 7/13/2013 12:46:00 PM
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