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I Cant Get Out Of The Bath Tub

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I Cant Get Out Of The Bath Tub

This goes past Stephen Kings
An even the Dead Sea, 
I Can’t Get Out Of the Bath Tub
Believe me you going to know the difference, 
From a business and corporation, 
When you can’t sleep, 
And you need stamina to put sleep, 
I can’t get out of the bath tub, 
I’m seeing black dots with difference sizes, 
You can tell when you in some good mediation
I can’t get out of the bath tub, 
My back have gone out and I feel an even cress in the middle of my chest, 
I can’t get out of the bath tub, 
All I’m just asking give credit when credit is due, 
I’m let the water out tub my body is not response to recharge of 
Fluid to the solar plexus, 
I’m no doctor but I guess I’ll be okay with sleep 
I can’t get out of the bath tub.

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  1. Date: 9/3/2013 10:12:00 AM
    Unique Poem Louis. Good descriptive of imagery, enjoyable poem overall. Check out some of my poems. Might find some you like. Peace.

    Borgo Avatar Louis Borgo
    Date: 9/3/2013 11:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I definitely do that and thank you for the comment god bless.