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An Unfinished Story

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An Unfinished Story

Step by step,
hand in hand,
I was always there for you.
Ups and downs,
lost and found,
I was always there for you.

Even though you never believed in us before,
and you chose the most hurtful way to slam the door,
I was always there for you.

You moved on quickly, never looked behind,
even though I smile today, it still hurts when I rewind.
Through happiness and pain,
every loss and every gain,
I have always been there for you.

The question still exists, the question about us,
my beautiful dreams went up in dust.

Now that you are here in front of me,
it brings back a rush of old memories.
You say hello, you said goodbye before,
I still believe that we could have had so much more.

Step by step,
hand in hand,
I will always be there for you.
through lows and highs,
till the day I die,
I will always be there for you.

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  1. Date: 7/25/2013 9:48:00 PM
    Karan; Congratulations with your win in Drake's Confessional contest. take care- LINDA

    Patade Avatar Karan Patade
    Date: 7/26/2013 12:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Linda :)
  1. Date: 7/25/2013 6:27:00 PM
    Great poem of devotion Karan, congrats on your win xxx

    Patade Avatar Karan Patade
    Date: 7/26/2013 12:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a bunch !!
  1. Date: 7/25/2013 6:07:00 PM
    A sad tale, I hope you have found the strength to move on. Congrats on your win.

    Patade Avatar Karan Patade
    Date: 7/26/2013 12:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Richard :)
  1. Date: 7/25/2013 3:58:00 PM
    congrats on win Shadow x smiles

    Patade Avatar Karan Patade
    Date: 7/26/2013 12:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Shadow PS - Love your name :)
  1. Date: 7/25/2013 2:04:00 PM
    Karan, good going in the -The Confessional- contest. CONGRATULATIONS:-) Have yourself a great day. >SKAT<

    Patade Avatar Karan Patade
    Date: 7/26/2013 12:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks SKAT :)
  1. Date: 7/25/2013 8:00:00 AM
    This read like a very sad slow dance. A massive desire for completion and security...and the need to satisfy that "What if". Congrats on winning Honorable mention on my "Confessional" contest.

    Patade Avatar Karan Patade
    Date: 7/26/2013 12:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Very happy to see my name on your list, Drake !! Thanks a ton !!
  1. Date: 7/6/2013 9:56:00 AM
    Beautifully written, such sadness and hope of unrequited love captured so well in your poem.

    Patade Avatar Karan Patade
    Date: 7/7/2013 12:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey, Thanks a ton !!