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  1. Date: 12/24/2013 9:06:00 PM

    Firstly Charmaine, I'd like to wish you and yours a very merry Christmas and a happy 2014. This was a beautiful write my little friend. It touched the rose within my heart with its gentle flow. One picture flowed so seamlessly into the next as you painted your picture with beauty. This write tells me that the rose within thy heart bloometh eternal in the garden of Love, thy most precious heart. Let your rose bloom eternal Charmaine and keep writing such beauty. Your Friend always....MIKE.

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 3:53:00 AM

    THAT FOR ME WAS SO SWEET AND VERY BEAUTIFUL SHINES OUT A BEAUTIFUL ROSE WITHIN THE HEART EXCELLENT PIECE

  1. Date: 8/28/2013 10:13:00 AM

    Amazing write that reaches in my heart and says I want that too! Beautifully written! Hugs

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 7:37:00 PM

    nw i no where i can find my inspiration where love touches hearts like mine, yours and others thank you

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 1:55:00 AM

    Beautiful poem and the title is outstanding. Congratulations! G.

  1. Date: 7/13/2013 6:54:00 PM

    Fairies can only exsist where they are believed in [kinda like God ;)] BELIEVE give them a door and maybe some small bits of food and milk WHO knows who will come? This is a real cool article about the belief in fairies in your area http://zeluna.net/fairies/celtic-fairies-understanding-the-celtic-fairiees-in-fairy-tales-ch1.html L & L

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi Date: 7/13/2013 6:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    PS that's a very touching poem, I could see some of it as a children's book!
  1. Date: 7/12/2013 6:10:00 PM

    You have touched on every aspect of love but the one that tore at me most was.... like a child lays his head / upon the lap of a sterile mother/ in her fertile dream.......I have lived that and so felt it. You are so beautiful and talented and inspiring. SuZ

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 4:31:00 PM

    This is so beautiful!

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 4:28:00 PM

    LOVE YOUR WRITE FULL OF EMOTION WHERE YOU FROM SOUP ME DAVIDSCOTTXXXX

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 4:21:00 PM

    A very powerful write Charmaine, you hold no barriers in this gem, have a great weekend and thank you for stopping by, love xxx

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 12:12:00 PM

    passing through and hoping to see a new one ,charm... :) huggs!

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 12:04:00 AM

    hi, sweetie, thanks for being one of the first to see my new poem tonight. How are you doing with that gorgeous baby of yours? Sure hope to see a new poem from you soon. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 9:07:00 PM

    Beautiful words!

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 10:12:00 PM

    I liked it alot .

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 10:11:00 PM

    This poem reached me .I felt it. I got it and I loved it

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 7/10/2013 12:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Im so glad you like it john
  1. Date: 7/9/2013 11:35:00 AM

    Love this Chrma!Just wonderful.The following lines are my favourite.-- like a child lays his head / upon the lap of a sterile mother/ in her fertile dream

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 7/9/2013 2:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Tnks kash..when i wrote those verses..it wasn t easy cause it was really inspired by a very close friend who had problems conceiving and when she did get pregbant..Her child died in the womb before it was born...Somehow i gor thinking of her whilst writing..Tnks so much
  1. Date: 7/9/2013 7:03:00 AM

    - Sounds so beautiful in your poem Charma! - What is more beautiful than love - Have a nice day my friend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 7/9/2013 2:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Tnks dear Annalise and whilat in Turkey..Dont forget to buy some turkish delights..Enjoy : )
  1. Date: 7/8/2013 1:57:00 PM

    Bold, vulnerable, & superb. I am beside myself here. Let the heart continue to rise. Tremendous!

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 7/9/2013 3:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Tnks for your constant support Drake
  1. Date: 7/7/2013 11:16:00 AM

    Both sides filled up, head and tail. Wonderfully done. Enjoyed nicely. Loved always, bl

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 7/9/2013 3:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Tnks so much
  1. Date: 7/7/2013 7:26:00 AM

    This is both sensual and charming.Such a joy to read.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 7/9/2013 3:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Tnks so much
  1. Date: 7/7/2013 4:51:00 AM

    I CANT..IN WORDS EXPRESS...WHAT THIS POEM DID TO ME> That I got a lump in my throat...is nothing new with you...That I was Moved to TEARS...THAT is Nothing New Either...WHO ARE YOU??? ARE YOU AN ENCHANTING GODDESS? No..Just Our Very OWN...VERY HUMAN...CHARMAINE...DOING WHAT You were MEANT TO DO... THRILL US! With YOUR AWESOME BEAUTY!!! NO ONE DOES IT BETTER...THAN YOU ...To my FAVS ...ABSOLUTELY STUNNING!!! Doesn't get any better than this...That's what i always say...until the next time... I SIMPLY ADORE YOU...That's all i'll ever know for sure...

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 7/9/2013 3:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You re always so kind to my humble verse frank and i thankyou so much
  1. Date: 7/6/2013 12:42:00 PM

    tender is the word with sweeet imploring words, charm... you fill my senses; riveting song!..:) hugggs

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 7/10/2013 12:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey tnks dear
  1. Date: 7/6/2013 10:58:00 AM

    Full of emotion, wonderful use of simile and images!

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 7/10/2013 12:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Tnks so much
  1. Date: 7/6/2013 10:40:00 AM

    you are a poet of unlimited belief in love and God. Always poetically expressing these beliefs! love the romantic imagery here.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 7/10/2013 12:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi sweetie..tnks so mucho
  1. Date: 7/6/2013 10:19:00 AM

    Inspired by an Oldie song 'Is this love?' by Bob Marley

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 8:34:00 AM

    † I Remember When I Was Around Twenty-One Years Of Age, A Baby, Beautiful Charma Chamaine ˜ In The Midst Amid A Darkened Night Upon This Edge And Life ? Standing At The Door Within A Make-Shift Bedroom Asking 'Our Father In Heaven,' Whom In This Place I Truly Never Knew ? To Fill Me With, 'His Love,' That I May Feel As Hold Such Beauty Afore Saying Goodbye Unto Her Light Of Day This Reason A World ˜ A Few Years Later 'His Majesty' Showed Me * Whileas Saving Myself But Then 'His Beauty,' Crushed Me Like Grapes Aneath 'Majestic's' Feet ? This Is Beautiful Just Like You A Beautiful Fave ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, John

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 7/10/2013 12:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Tnks so much john..way too kind
  1. Date: 7/6/2013 8:08:00 AM

    THIS IS BEYOND BEAUTIFUL, My sweet beautiful Charmaine....I can't pick which verses spoke to me, because they all did, in a different way...WOW WOW WOW WOW! I'm so moved. Going to my favorites to read again...Hugs, my dear

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 7/10/2013 12:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your comment is Woooow..big hug