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A Daydream

He charges my world with his steamy charms;
lost in love's lane while in his gentle arms;
waves of warmth cocoons me, feeling no harm;
I sleep like a baby, not to be waken by morn-alarm...
I want to quit candy-dreaming about you,
wake me up Sweetie, tell me this is true!

You are the twinkling star in my twilight skies;
the splatter of sparkles stealing through my eyes.
I am lost in this plain, this must be paradise:
a world with a man so wonderful and wise.
I want to quit candy-dreaming about you,
wake me up Sweetie, tell me this is true!

I see boundless bloom in your flowery face,
you revive my soul with your warm embrace;
forever, I want to stay in the perfect place,
with faith, I ask God for endless grace.
I want to quit candy-dreaming about you,
wake me up Sweetie, tell me this is true!


I relish tonight your sugar-candy lips;
reminiscing the clips of our romantic trips.
The steady swirl and twirl at the seashore,
like Oliver twist, I desire more, and more...
I want to quit candy-dreaming about you,
wake me up Sweetie, tell me this is true!

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  1. Date: 5/11/2014 1:25:00 AM
    Beautiful write Adeleke worth a great win ! Congrats!

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 7:39:00 PM
    AWESOME.................SKAT

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 9:44:00 PM
    Adeleke, enjoyed your late night poem. CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) :-) :-) in Nathan's contest... Linda

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 8:30:00 PM
    well done Nate

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 3:07:00 AM
    So glad to see you on the winners list my friend!...Beautiful love poem with a very unique rhyme scheme...Congratulations sir - Tim

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 9:47:00 PM
    Adeleke; Congratulations with your win in Drake's Confessional contest. take care- LINDA

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 6:25:00 PM
    A charming poem Adeleke, congrats on your win, excellet write, xxx

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 5:59:00 PM
    This could be a song, congrats!

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 3:56:00 PM
    congrats on win Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 2:03:00 PM
    Adeleke, good going in the -The Confessional- contest. CONGRATULATIONS:-) Have yourself a great day. >SKAT<

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 8:05:00 AM
    Adeleke, great job on this poem! You won Honorable mention in my "Confessional" contest! There was a ton of playfulness & innocence in this piece. Mixed with this all, though, was simple desire. You harnessed these feelings with depth! Excellent!

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 8:23:00 AM
    A lovely sweet poem, a sweet treat to read:) thankyou. <3 cherie

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 4:35:00 AM
    Cute poem..!! I like it, especially because that "candy-dreaming" phrase.. :D Nicely written..good job. ;)