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Foolish Pride

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Foolish Pride

Once at the hell gate:
"My reservation was sent"
Sinner claims, loudly.

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  1. Date: 11/8/2013 10:57:00 AM

    wow... Don't go....heheh JK...love it... you are a great senryu poet...LINDA

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 2:23:00 PM

    haha. This struck me quite funny.

    Candy Avatar Shirley Candy Date: 7/6/2013 2:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :D :D :D
  1. Date: 7/6/2013 12:44:00 AM

    Damn! Strong! This is what happens when pride lacks substance. Excellent job!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes Date: 7/6/2013 7:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    HA! Too funny! :)
    Candy Avatar Shirley Candy Date: 7/6/2013 1:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I wrote this poem few hours ago while watching news about corruptor on TV..lol.. :P