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ADDICTION

written 9th Sept 2011


I want you gone
 so why are you still holding on
I don't need you anymore!
 so let me go, go on.. I've shown you the door
I've found peace, within the grace of God
 his love is so much more, than you could even try to endure
My freedom is awaiting me
 please.... I beg you, set me free
I DON'T EVER, WANT YOU ANYMORE
 DO YOU NOT SEE, I'M NO LONGER YOURS...
I have been set free, redeemed by my God

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  1. Date: 7/5/2013 2:15:00 AM
    Hi Denise, I like the approach on this poem, direct action, it sounds like you are driving the Devil away from you, it is almost done in an amusing way, you have a flair for this and maybe you could write some humorous poems it may be a good challenge for you, it is sometimes difficult to do romantic poems, as I don't do too many myself, but this is very good, all the best. John