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Raw moon Lips swoon Rooms locked Shirts dropped Flesh beams Love steams • • Kids cry Hots...bye! ~ Make Me Laugh Contest For Heather Ober 3 July 2013

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  1. Date: 7/22/2013 6:16:00 AM

    Loved it! Congratulations on your win! Cheers, Roy

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 4:25:00 PM

    Congrats on your fine winning entry

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 6:17:00 AM

    Congrats, Nette.....Steamy...I agree with Suzette...those dots leave lots to the imagination! :)

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 2:51:00 AM

    Nette congrats on win Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 2:19:00 AM

    Love the dots .. They speak volumes :-)... lol. Congrats, Nette. Love, Su

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 1:24:00 AM

    Nette, yours is outstanding for this contest. Love how you made it based on a theme. BIG congrats.

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 9:09:00 PM

    Very cute scenario with vivid imagery. Chuckling out loud at the title, congratulations on your win :)

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 8:20:00 PM

    Hmmm...Seems I recall you saying you couldn't make the little ditty work?...WRONG!...Congrats - Tim

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 8:18:00 PM

    Nette, A good one. Congratulations! with the smiles. LUV ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 7:28:00 PM

    Nicely done Nette!! Congrats on your win....Jim

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 7:12:00 PM

    Nette, you rocked this! That last footle is priceless! You are just as fabulous at writing humour as you are at writing profoundly descriptive scenes. Big congrats on your win in my contest, my lovely friend! :)

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 4:10:00 AM

    ;-)..... "kids cry" - yes, that about sums it up, lol. Love, Su

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 6:09:00 PM

    GOOD ONES!! good and hot.

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 5:42:00 PM

    Cute poem here! Quite enjoyable read! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 11:09:00 AM

    Hi! my friend, you have captured the interesting one. Superb imagination. Lovely done. Always, bl

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 8:59:00 AM

    Good morning Nette

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 8:39:00 AM

    More mail, don't fail (to check your mail that is)

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 10:38:00 PM

    Haha Loved it. I'm fine luv. How are you. Was real busy with work and travel. Thanks for liking the poem Nette.

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 9:00:00 PM

    This is a perfect set of Footles her my friend! I really loved reading this delightful poem this evening, such a glorious piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 8:26:00 PM

    Ooh whoo!!Love these footles!I have sent u a soupmail.

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 8:20:00 PM

    Smile, glad I read this light heart poem before bedtime, love xxx

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 2:19:00 PM

    Life in a glimpse! Masterpiece!

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 2:10:00 PM

    Been there many years ago..Enjoyed your very expressive and creative work stating how life can be sometimes..Thanks for your visits ..It is good here but very cloudy with the change of some heavy rain..We could use that heavy rain..Sara

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 1:07:00 PM

    It's cute. Molto brava! :) G

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 11:21:00 AM

    A clever one you are. This made me smile!