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WHEN I LOVE THEE

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WHEN I LOVE THEE


         I am not a voluptuous beauty
            Nor do i live a life of purity
    I can only say: I love wholeheartedly
             With all I am so truthfully

      I have been keeping my heart open
     Though it gets hurt and pain so often
                I never have gone irate 
     As I know love changes the heart rate..

            Guys tried to coo and woo
       They say words as for "only you"
      However, hard to believe it is true?
      As I have been seeing some untrue

            I have always give chances
    As my heart marks with tact entrances
        I learned from various instances
       Acknowledging man in romances

        In a place where rules impedes
       Two persons who wants to bid
        Not of money but of affection
    Between them genuine determination

                    I love thee..
          Not of what you have..
        Not even of who you are..
       But with how you are to me..

                    If I love you..
You don't need to tell me much what to do..
        As me, myself will show you..
             I am that real and true.. 

             Yes, I am like by many
     Tell you what, I don't like this honey..
       Nor do I'm proud of it in anyway
     As one is is enough to make me stay

          Stand with me through it all
As i'll do give my best for us not to fall
         My name your sweetest call
              Echoing in every wall..

            Hold me firm and dearly
   As you'll allow me to move closely
            We'll make it anyhow
      Just go smoothly on the flow...

       We are strong, aren't we?
          No one moving alone
As together we'll face phases in tune..
       Even if we will be in dunes..


by
olive_eloi
3:25 pm
07/13/2013

CONTEST: ANY POEM GOES #13
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8TH PLACE (TO GOD BE THE GREATEST GLORY)


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  1. Date: 3/16/2014 5:13:00 AM

    Wonderful poem penned well and congrats on the win, olive. This goes to my fav

    guillermo Avatar olive eloisa guillermo Date: 3/16/2014 5:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks sir.. :) to Good be the glory.. :)
  1. Date: 3/16/2014 4:20:00 AM

    Olive:) Awesome win.... Take care Love *Skat

    guillermo Avatar olive eloisa guillermo Date: 3/16/2014 5:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks skat.. :) to God always the glory.. :)
  1. Date: 3/16/2014 4:03:00 AM

    Olive, Congratulations! Thank you for the support ~LINDA~

    guillermo Avatar olive eloisa guillermo Date: 3/16/2014 5:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks :) to God always be the glory
  1. Date: 7/3/2013 5:21:00 PM

    Knowing self from within, in order to love self & others beyond. All or nothing when it comes to matters of the heart. Nicely written!

    guillermo Avatar olive eloisa guillermo Date: 3/16/2014 6:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) thanks.. i remember you one of my commentor before :)
  1. Date: 7/3/2013 3:51:00 PM

    This is a touching poem...very strong emotions expressed here. Describes my type of woman in some ways!! :)

    guillermo Avatar olive eloisa guillermo Date: 3/16/2014 6:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks much.. :) to God always the glory :)