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WHEN I LOVE THEE

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Below is the poem entitled WHEN I LOVE THEE which was written by poet Olive Eloisa Guillermo. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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WHEN I LOVE THEE

I am not a voluptuous beauty Nor do i live a life of purity I can only say: I love wholeheartedly With all I am so truthfully I have been keeping my heart open Though it gets hurt and pain so often I never have gone irate As I know love changes the heart rate.. Guys tried to coo and woo They say words as for "only you" However, hard to believe it is true? As I have been seeing some untrue I have always give chances As my heart marks with tact entrances I learned from various instances Acknowledging man in romances In a place where rules impedes Two persons who wants to bid Not of money but of affection Between them genuine determination I love thee.. Not of what you have.. Not even of who you are.. But with how you are to me.. If I love you.. You don't need to tell me much what to do.. As me, myself will show you.. I am that real and true.. Yes, I am like by many Tell you what, I don't like this honey.. Nor do I'm proud of it in anyway As one is is enough to make me stay Stand with me through it all As I'll do give my best for us not to fall My name your sweetest call Echoing in every wall.. Hold me firm and dearly As you'll allow me to move closely We'll make it anyhow Just go smoothly on the flow... We are strong, aren't we? No one moving alone As together we'll face phases in tune.. Even if we will be in dunes.. by olive_eloi 3:25 pm 07/13/2013 CONTEST: ANY POEM GOES #13 SPONSOR: POET DESTROYER 8TH PLACE (TO GOD BE THE GREATEST GLORY)

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  1. Date: 3/16/2014 5:13:00 AM
    Wonderful poem penned well and congrats on the win, olive. This goes to my fav

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 3/16/2014 5:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks sir.. :) to Good be the glory.. :)
  1. Date: 3/16/2014 4:20:00 AM
    Olive:) Awesome win.... Take care Love *Skat

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 3/16/2014 5:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks skat.. :) to God always the glory.. :)
  1. Date: 3/16/2014 4:03:00 AM
    Olive, Congratulations! Thank you for the support ~LINDA~

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 3/16/2014 5:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks :) to God always be the glory
  1. Date: 7/3/2013 5:21:00 PM
    Knowing self from within, in order to love self & others beyond. All or nothing when it comes to matters of the heart. Nicely written!

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 3/16/2014 6:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) thanks.. i remember you one of my commentor before :)
  1. Date: 7/3/2013 3:51:00 PM
    This is a touching poem...very strong emotions expressed here. Describes my type of woman in some ways!! :)

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 3/16/2014 6:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks much.. :) to God always the glory :)