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Tired and worn

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Tired and worn

I am tired and worn,
Like a bird fluttering in cage,
Or Like a puppet dancing on 
stage,

I am tired and worn,
My heart bleeds under the 
crown of my dreams,
Which with thorns, is adorned,

I am tired and worn,
Just hours ago it was dawn,
My dreams were like vibrant 
colors,
Of the rainbow,with a luminous 
glow,

But all now left is a wreakage,
And a heart waned beyond 
age,
Filled with despair and rage,

Bitter and jealous of those
Who in life like angels have 
rose,
To fulfill their dreams, with 
clever schemes,

Maybe tomorrow will be new 
day,
An ethereal ray, may,
Enlighten the way,
But tonight,
My heart is torn,
And I am tired and worn..

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  1. Date: 7/12/2013 5:58:00 PM
    Jagdeep, this is a very moving and poignant poem. Very well scripted and very heart felt emotion. Congratulations on your win :)

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 3:22:00 PM
    MY HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR AWESOME WIN & VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM my dear friend, Jagdeep! Thanks for sharing as well. love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 1:33:00 PM
    J.. Being weary can drain the energy from one's soul, but with a new day comes new strength. Hang in there. Congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 7:12:00 PM
    congrats, j. ran

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 4:54:00 PM
    Come rest awhile - regain your strength - Get ready for tomorrow - You'll find your dreams still in sight - outside these tiring sorrows.... Great win, my friend....Jake

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 2:41:00 PM
    Jaqdeep.. Congratulations... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 12:32:00 AM
    "tremendously awesome!!! SKAT"