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You Lose, I gain

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You Lose, I gain

Oh! Have mercy on my soul
And release the tension in my 
I think you're full of it...
Don't tell me otherwise
I think you're full of b.s.
Don't seek me - I'm not wise 
I seek Him like 
a unique, golden prize 
You're gonna face your 
Oh! Have mercy on my soul
And release the tension in my 
You'll feel my pain...
Dripping like continual rain...
Driving me insane...
You'll lose, not gain
A heart like mine
Because it's already serpentine 
and pumping vigorously 
With violent loathe and 
You rejected me with your 
ignorant words that stab me 
like a bloody, swift sword...
You have no heart towards 
anybody You have no 
consideration towards me, 
baby...and you gain not victory
'Cause you're gonna pay...
For all those cruel words you 
Stay with me...for one more 
Oh! Have mercy on my soul
And release the tension in my 
skull, Lord
Where art thou...? 
Where have you gone?
You'll feel my 
a lonely, gloomy day...I'm 
doused in a sun ray...
I bid you a farewell...
oh well...oh well...
Where do your heart dwell? 
In heaven or hell?
Are you a fallen angel?
You're as dysfunctional as 
computer cable...
You break like a cheap, useless 
You were just a frivolous, 
foolish fable...

Oh! Have mercy on my soul
And release the tension in my 
skull - be my shield, armor or 
You rejected you're 
with them
Your addiction will kill you in no 
time...and it's a crime that 
you've committed...
Not don't start cryin' 
You're gonna pay...
You're gonna feel dismay

You'll lose power
I'll win control

Now, I got the power!

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