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Droplets

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Droplets

The droplets of water
... cling...
Upon the branches of the tree
 crystalline objects
hanging delicately
Catching the morning rays
....Glistening....
  like diamonds
adorning the branches
evaporating
just like a desert mirage.

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  1. Date: 8/18/2013 3:11:00 AM

    Well this is very nice picture you wrote up there ;} <3

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 4:30:00 PM

    - Phyllis, nice to read your beautiful poem tonight. - You sure made ??a beautiful picture. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 7:11:00 PM

    This is so nice. I can just picture them. They must look beautiful. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 5:29:00 AM

    Those dewdrops or raindrops are like magic..Enjoyed reading your description of them..You captured the vision so well..Thanks for your visits..Sara

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 10:59:00 PM

    well, you are not so dried up yet. Just look at this gem that you produced. Sorry you are in the slumps, dear. I had hoped that this would finally be a good year, but it is the worst one of my life. for REAL. I hope you and I can get out of our slumps.

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 4:20:00 PM

    love this - just beautiful. So glad to hear you're over that nasty flu, Phyll. Hope you have a wonderful weekend x

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 7:32:00 PM

    nicely penned ...enjoyed

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 6:49:00 PM

    I love this. Wonderful!