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Stuck in Limbo

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Stuck in Limbo

Time keeps on moving but nothing has changed
I still am stranded in my eternal land of dread
Close consideration leaves myself to be blamed

I have almost lost touch and become estranged
Often times lost in thought, laying in a cold bed
Time keeps on moving but nothing  has changed

I think if I had a leseer will I would be derranged
Occasionally I think I would be better of dead
Close consideration leaves myself to be blamed

No worries though, no easy way to be claimed
The road to happiness, I soon hope to tread
Time keeps on moving but nothing has changed

I don't think my stubborness will ever be tamed
A hard head makes a soft *** they have said
Close consideration leaves myself to be blamed

Someday all my affairs will be properly arranged
I will lead the existence I should have always led
Time keeps on moving but nothing has changed
Close consideration leaves myself to be blamed

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  1. Date: 7/31/2013 4:18:00 PM

    Wayland; This is very good, but why should you blame yourself, sometimes it isn't even our fault. Thanks for reading ( The Hermit ) Go ahead and post your Spanish poem. I will read it. I have posted one ( Frio En El Alma ) It is also in English. ( Cold In The Soul ) Lucilla

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 6:43:00 PM

    Thanks so much for your comment on my lyrics! The person I wrote them for is a sibling of mine who has had a really rough life, so they mean a lot to me and him as well, that's why I posted them despite the fact that I found a lot of the lines to be cliché. Oh, and the villanelle I posted is actually the old villanelle I had that you have already read- it got deleted on accident when I was removing other poems I didn't want on the Soup! Love this villanelle by the way!! You're great at the form!

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 6:52:00 PM

    I really like this write. I can relate so much! Great work!