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Red Sun

Eileen Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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Red Sun

Red Sun strides into glory
Pompous owner of the sky
Melts everything he touches
Solar flare in you

Red Sun Contest
Russell Silvey
July 2, 2013

Use of Personification

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  1. Date: 7/5/2013 12:16:00 PM
    Beautiful imagination with wonderful adoration. Lovely done. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 7/5/2013 12:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Wow! Thanks BL....going to keep my fingers crossed!
  1. Date: 7/3/2013 2:45:00 PM
    Will you please stop making me think for myself, thank you. Take care, Richard

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 7/7/2013 3:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Richard......what are you trying to imply????? Come now....spit it out! ;)
    Seal Avatar Richard D Seal
    Date: 7/5/2013 3:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    WOW look who talking lol
    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 7/5/2013 12:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Can't help it, dearie...you DO bring so much sunshine into my life! You are so full of yourself, Mr Seal. Please....humility IS a virtue! ;)
  1. Date: 7/3/2013 6:07:00 AM
    Russell will really like this one.

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 7/5/2013 12:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Richard. Hope you like it as well! :)
  1. Date: 7/2/2013 11:07:00 PM
    LOVE this one for Russell!

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 7/5/2013 12:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOVE....LOVE! :) Thanks, Andrea. You are a dear!
  1. Date: 7/2/2013 10:33:00 PM
    Looks like something Russell will like.

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 7/5/2013 12:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I sure hope so, Robert. It would be nice if I were able to impress him! I think he was going more for the color changes in the sky and something in praise of nature. Silly me, I HAVE to get romance in there! Thanks for the post.
  1. Date: 7/2/2013 5:57:00 PM
    A cute poem and nice use of personification. love phyl

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 7/5/2013 12:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I love cute! Thank you, Phyllis. I'm touched. Hugs
  1. Date: 7/2/2013 2:26:00 PM
    Awesome one Eileen, you used a little geniality for this one heh! love xxx

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 7/5/2013 12:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Rose, dearie, so pleasant to get a visit from you...always. Thanks honey!