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Changing Sky

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Changing Sky

How many are the years our world has been an entity? And for how many more has there been sky, the earth’s celestial skin, which must have somewhat changed from years before? In purer times, man may have seen it loom with diamond clarity of layered blues. Though like today, it also grayed with gloom, it must have dazzled dusks in splendid hues. And even now, despite new damage done to its most fragile part, how it can shine with utter brilliance, changing with the sun while we below keep marring sky’s design! Perhaps a Holocaust will bleed it red. Though changed, it will remain when all are dead.

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  1. Date: 12/19/2013 10:19:00 PM
    Wow, What an incredible poem. I adore the rhyme, meter, and message of this poem. This will be going in my favorites.

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 4:17:00 PM
    Great entry and winning work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 2:19:00 PM
    Andrea, .... congrats once again *****SKAT

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 8:56:00 PM
    You are fantastic at sonnets. The ever changing sky will keep on changing long after we are gone. Imagine what it will be like a thousand years from not. love phyl

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 5:18:00 PM
    I expected this to be a winner, Congratulations Petal. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 1:47:00 PM
    Andrea, love your changing sky winning poem... :-) Congratulations (-: ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 1:02:00 AM
    you certainly have a winning formula. It`s called talent..

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 8:01:00 PM
    Yet another dynamite poem, another winner. Congratulations, my friend... Jack

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 5:05:00 PM
    Way to go girl straight to the top congrats on your win love xxx

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 2:49:00 PM
    Congrats on your super win Andrea love how you write hope I get better too

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 2:26:00 PM
    An excellent sonnet Andrea. I love the last stanza. Congratulations on you super win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 12:16:00 AM
    Great piece, really enjoyed, yes we are slowly destroying this planet, so very sad Thank you for the read...Peter

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 6:11:00 PM
    Oh yes Petal, put the wind up us all why don't yer lol. But that 'perhaps' does loom large in the sky, I would agree. I see you tried to placate yourself with Tom, pathetic lol. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 4:14:00 PM
    love this thought provoking piece, my friend

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 10:51:00 AM
    A great truth, beautifully delivered. If Earth does not shake us off first.... Love, Su

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 8:41:00 PM
    No, not a pretty picture, Andrea - but very prettily painted.-Red

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 1:57:00 PM
    Wonderful!See you can mould any topic into the Sonnet form :)

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 7:40:00 AM
    P.S. My terzanelle took me a few hours to write - though not in one sitting. It is certainly a challenging form!!

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 7:40:00 AM
    WOW. I love where you decided to take this topic. It is so true - We are slowly destroying our beautiful world. As always, a gorgeous sonnet written by your deft hands!

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 5:26:00 PM
    Sobering thought. Well expressed.

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