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Tangled Vines

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Below is the poem entitled Tangled Vines which was written by poet Shadow Hamilton. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Tangled Vines

Tangled vines kept closed the door
that led into the secret garden
the small girl very patiently
one by one untangled them

It took her oh so very long 
until at last they were all free
slowly, and so excitedly she
opened the door and peered

Her eyes wide as saucers
as she beheld the beauty
a stunning garden decked 
with flowers made of jewels

contest: Tangled Vines  written 06/30/2013

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  1. Date: 7/31/2013 1:30:00 PM
    This made me smile. congrats to you and your garden. BG

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/1/2013 5:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Barbara thats good lol ty for reading and congrats
  1. Date: 7/31/2013 3:58:00 AM
    Beautiful and lovely write,Shadow..Congrats on your superb win in this contest...XOXO...

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/1/2013 5:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Olusequn Ty glad you enjoyed it Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/30/2013 3:44:00 PM
    You bring imagination to life here dear Shadow congrats on your super win xxx

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/1/2013 5:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Vienna nice of you Ty all well? Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/30/2013 2:36:00 PM
    Ahhh!! Congrats on your winning work..Great story told in poetic form..Sara

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 7:42:00 PM
    a good free verse . Thank you for sharing <3 ~SKAT~ <3

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 9:54:00 PM
    Dear Shadow, I would love to come see this beautiful garden that you just untangled, we can have tea and biscuits by the trellis and share laughter and good cheer I enjoyed your poem Shadow, very much, Love, Peace, Light, xxx

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 6:51:00 PM
    'The Secret Garden' is one of my very favorite movies....love this. Suz

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/29/2013 6:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi SuZ the book is fantastic +) ty for your time reading Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 6/29/2013 6:13:00 PM
    Shadow I hope you don't mind but the first line of the second verse, and last line of third verse needs correcting. Otherwise it sounds Fine. Warm Smiles, Connie

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/29/2013 6:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Connie no I don't mind in the least. See what you think now ty Shadow x smiles