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DAY ONE

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DAY ONE

Day One, so on and so forth 
That's about how we met 
Took him away from another girl
Soon learned the word regret!

Day Two . . .  wasn't any better
Not like I thought it'd be
That selfish girl came round
And took him back from me!

Well sister let me tell you 
That guy belongs to me    
He's just so immature
So now we're on Day Three!

Thirty days rolled by 
Before I think I knew 
I'd passed another Day One
Rolled up in number Two

Finally! . . . I woke up 
Just as the alarm rang
I'll be late for 8th grade
So up and out I sprang!








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  1. Date: 7/8/2013 10:53:00 AM
    very well done...

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 11:12:00 AM
    Beautiful piece, smells honey. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 7:27:00 AM
    Very cute....:-) congratulations

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 5:13:00 PM
    Judy, a witty and enjoyable read. Congrats on the well deserved win :)

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 2:17:00 PM
    amazing

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 11:35:00 PM
    Judy, thank you for your day one entry and win... congrats!!! :-) From: Linda

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 10:32:00 PM
    A nice poem about adolescent puppy love.