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FADING INTO THE DARK OF NIGHT

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FADING INTO THE DARK OF NIGHT

written 21st June 2013


As my life... 'slowly' slips away
 this 'time'... 'I WILL NOT PRAY'.. for 
he too, hath left me this way
Month's tick by... and not 'one' soul, 
stops by
 this moment in time... I start to 
wonder "why"
During, my darkness 'and' 
addiction..
 love poured in... from, 'Every' 
direction..
I lay here now...as 'each' day passes
 memories of ..."me"... here!, as I 
slowly perish...into, darkness
My heart and soul... had become, 
God's alone..
 even...'he'  has left me... 
again,unloved... 
abandon...worthless...
Friend's and family... trust had 
them...'all' torn away
 my "fellowship", lead me to 
believe... I had a 'say'
None of them notice, 'as' to my 
dismay
 I was...right!...at the...very start..
Trust..."in no one"....giving "peace" 
to my... heart..
 my heart, back ... "to only me", 
that's who "I" can...believe
Poetry...takes my heart, mind and 
soul
 to world's....you, could never even... 
dream
I "will" consume myself....with fairy's 
and elve's
  forget the..."belief" that 'anyone 
else' would've, 'ever' cared...for 
"me"
They 'all'... only...ever.. cared for 
themselves...

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  1. Date: 6/28/2013 1:25:00 PM
    I think you are onto something with your poetry, Denise! Your words took me to a place long ago where someone very close to me felt those words. You are unique - embrace it - and keep writing. I'm not kidding - you're onto something. Hang in there. All will be well.